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Array ( [sid] => 135823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your It [time] => 2007-07-09 10:06:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Flying high
looking down
I start to wonder
The purpose of a frown

The problems that seem so huge
are really so tiny
So why should i worry bout useless things?
why should it bother me?

Life is too short to spend crying and feeling so down
you should never feel that way
so get up and get around

You will get knocked down
But you will get back up again
Your heart will break
But in time itll mend

Make your personality hard
But your soul soft as silk
Have a lot of fun, smile, laugh
but never forget to think

All day staring at the celing
what a waste of time!
You could be using it to do something useful
with your life

This is your life
your living it right now
so go and do something with it
turn it from dull to a "wow".

Lana - 25/6/07 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 19 [informant] => LanBanan88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Your It

Contributed by LanBanan88 on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 10:06:15 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Flying high
looking down
I start to wonder
The purpose of a frown

The problems that seem so huge
are really so tiny
So why should i worry bout useless things?
why should it bother me?

Life is too short to spend crying and feeling so down
you should never feel that way
so get up and get around

You will get knocked down
But you will get back up again
Your heart will break
But in time itll mend

Make your personality hard
But your soul soft as silk
Have a lot of fun, smile, laugh
but never forget to think

All day staring at the celing
what a waste of time!
You could be using it to do something useful
with your life

This is your life
your living it right now
so go and do something with it
turn it from dull to a "wow".

Lana - 25/6/07

Copyright © LanBanan88 ... [ 2007-07-09 10:06:15]
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Re: Your It (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 10:39:16 AM AEST
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nice write and welcome to ypdc :)

Re: Your It (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 11:03:39 AM AEST
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Inspirational, cure all poetry ,you write up a storm girl. I love the positive and get over yourself words. It is the answer that no one wants to hear....because it takes the giving of self...not the draining, poor me that is non-productive for humans. Honesty hurts when you just want to think about yourself.....truth is action....to make others avoid pain, find happiness and have purpose. Absolutely right on with this piece.

Re: Your It (User Rating: 1 )
by sona on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 11:43:06 AM AEST
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Now this is a wow poem
we usually donot realize the value of time
spend it in useless things
A very inspiring poem
Loved to read it
u seem to be avery good poet

Love
Kainat

Re: Your It (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 02:33:30 PM AEST
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Hi Lana .. welcome to YPDC.

I love the positive vibes in this. There is so much to
ponder and move a soul into creating and/or grabbing
the joys in life, rather than lament the lack thereof.

Beautiful write with a beautiful message. We all have the
power! Thank you for sharing this.

~Breezy

Re: Your It (User Rating: 1 )
by funnyface09 on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 02:51:17 PM AEST
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it certainly a WOW from me to you..
thanks for sharing..
i wished life could be much more interesting and not that dull everyday...

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