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[aid] => mick
[title] => Commited Destiny . . . Ben
[time] => 2007-07-09 06:32:32
[hometext] => Maybey we should think of what love could take from us before falling in love, instead of what we can take from love and then bolt the scene when it becomes to inconvienant to stay.
[bodytext] => I could have said i loved you and held you in my arm's, hung around for just awhile persuaded by your charmes. You could have used me to the hilt like women did before, break my heart then watch me wilt scared forever more. I could have waited paitently and then had sex with you, lying through my teeth the way a lot of men would do. Because you were so beautiful contrary to the ruel, you could've cheated on me and played me for a fool. But in stead you love'd me you tamed my very will, you knew i love'd you so damn much another man i'd KILL. But you saw something in me that a woman's born to see, that thing that make's a women called commited destiny. It wasn't merely beauty or some sleasy quest for lust, and better men i'm sure you knew could've left me in the dust. I could have said i love'd you your the answer to my dream, make some kids then leave you with our marriage in midstream. Then you might have left me it wouldn't be hard to do, leaving me to bare the pain of geting over you. Yes all these things we might have done in stead we fell in love, yet neither one of us believed in someone up above. How can it be? i ask of me two hearts can love so true, i'd be a freaking nightmare without the thought of you. To wake up every morning and not see you lying there, growing old alone thinking love was so unfair. We were more than just two people soon in love to be, we were what the angels called, commited destiny. Ben [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 2 [informant] => myheartsvoice [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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