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[aid] => mick
[title] => Just One More Shot
[time] => 2007-07-08 15:51:07
[hometext] => not that great but i would really appreciate some feedback thanks!
[bodytext] => Just one more shot and I’ll be out No more pain no more thoughts Drink it down swallow it hard The sweet poison burns my throat I can’t stand the room is spinning But I’m content just where I’m sitting You’re not there no thoughts of you at all For the first time in a while I feel good Just one more shot and I’ll be out No more pain no more thoughts Drink it down swallow it hard It slithers so easily down my throat I can’t see everything is blurry But I’m content there’s nothing to see I’ll stay here all night until the sun rises I’ll leave when reality settles back in Just one more shot and I’ll be out No more pain no more thoughts Drink it down swallow it hard I can’t even taste it sliding down my throat The morning sun shines my head is pounding Slowly I rise my legs are feel weak I guess I drank a little to much But all I wanted was just to be numb [comments] => 3 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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