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Array ( [sid] => 135799 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => me, myself, and I [time] => 2007-07-08 09:05:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A silent tear falls gracefully
from the one who sits infront of me
hair of black and eyes of brown
turmoil wraps her head..a crown

Patiently I'm looking through
waiting till she speaks what's true
the smile that she wears so sweet
can't hide her fears of great defeat

She stares at me as I stare back
I wish she'd cut herself some slack
we talk awhile, her eyes get bright
her head held high, a wonderous sight

When all is said and done she stands
grasps the mirror in her hands
walks away now feeling free
I relax, now back inside of me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 43 [informant] => nates_JrAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

me, myself, and I

Contributed by nates_JrAT on Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 09:05:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A silent tear falls gracefully
from the one who sits infront of me
hair of black and eyes of brown
turmoil wraps her head..a crown

Patiently I'm looking through
waiting till she speaks what's true
the smile that she wears so sweet
can't hide her fears of great defeat

She stares at me as I stare back
I wish she'd cut herself some slack
we talk awhile, her eyes get bright
her head held high, a wonderous sight

When all is said and done she stands
grasps the mirror in her hands
walks away now feeling free
I relax, now back inside of me.

Copyright © nates_JrAT ... [ 2007-07-08 09:05:58]
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Re: me, myself, and I (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 03:25:08 AM AEST
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I could tell from the title that this was going to be one
of those kinds of poems. The kind that speaks directly
to the heart. We have all been inside that mirror pleading
for any kind of break. And we have all denied ourselves
that kindness. (One, I might add, which we so freely
afford others; it's a shame).

This was a very well written glimpse into the heart of a
soul, desperate to talk herself into believing again. And
that she succeeded is monument to the hopefulness the
poet seems to carry. Well done!

~Breezy

Re: me, myself, and I (User Rating: 1 )
by sona on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 08:02:00 AM AEST
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What a wonderful poem
I agree with breezy that it goes straight to the heart
Regards
Kainat

Re: me, myself, and I (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:58:42 AM AEST
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very nicely done and i agree with Rox on this.
thanks for sharing

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