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she lays idle
despair latches on like a leech
the answers of her darkened life
seem oh so out of reach

The lesson given
she learned it well
hiding wounds that never heal
she smiles at you
pretending its ok
but inside the pain is burning every day

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uselessness

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:40:17 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Drowning in a sea of uselessness
she lays idle
despair latches on like a leech
the answers of her darkened life
seem oh so out of reach

The lesson given
she learned it well
hiding wounds that never heal
she smiles at you
pretending its ok
but inside the pain is burning every day

Vampyress Jenni

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Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:06:18 AM AEST
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I always like knowing why someone wrote something
Like what was the motivation, the inspiration.
Kinda short
But its like....
A mother hiding her problems for others wouldnt worry?

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:06:41 AM AEST
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Oh yeah!
It was good
I liked it.

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:32:10 AM AEST
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vividly insightful compassionate images, beautifully written,

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 11:10:56 AM AEST
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this is so deep and heartfelt....... beautiful in its sadness...... our mothers seem to forget once we get older we know their pain even if they dont want to admit it.

Michelle

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:09:18 PM AEST
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The seperation of you and yet who ever you write about is fascinating, and yet you manage to get the feeling of the peice across in such a delicate yet maeningful way.
very lovely Jenn . . .

Ben

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 02:35:33 PM AEST
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Really deep, just beautiful and very well written.

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by Mila on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:06:35 PM AEST
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Wow that's deep and sad but i like how you put into such short words, i can feel the impact!

Re: uselessness (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 01:24:54 PM AEST
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very awesome write. Very dark and emotionals but beautiful in its performance. Nice flow - love it.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond

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