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another piece of me dies
take off the disguise

realize that all that really is
really isn't anything at all
we are just passing time

yesterday becomes today
the shadows of another become
your sweetest lover

hearts bound to a song that never been wrote

choking on the words
your stomach churns
your body burns
finally you recognize
you never were in love ..with me

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inside your eyes

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 02:23:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Inside your eyes
another piece of me dies
take off the disguise

realize that all that really is
really isn't anything at all
we are just passing time

yesterday becomes today
the shadows of another become
your sweetest lover

hearts bound to a song that never been wrote

choking on the words
your stomach churns
your body burns
finally you recognize
you never were in love ..with me

Vampyress Jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-07-03 02:23:07]
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Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 02:37:17 AM AEST
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Jenni,
It is heart wrenching to read....so filled with emotion. The last stanza, I could feel that stomach churn, it is an awful feeling. Excellent write my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Poess on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 05:27:05 AM AEST
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I like this. I love the last lines as well...
Great job

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 11:24:36 PM AEST
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Just a perfect write.loved it

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 03:25:06 AM AEST
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wow Jenni powerful words
an amazing write
take care
hugs

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:42:56 AM AEST
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oh so sad and bittersweet, a fabulous write!

hugs n' love nessa

roses

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:02:35 AM AEST
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This is beautifuly realistic, jenn u stil pack a wallope with your point blank intensity. such true comand is obvious in your style along with devistating impact with your in your face approach. Simply put, a truly artistic write . . .

thank u 4 your loyal readership while i was unable to get on.

((((Jenni))))

Ben

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:48:26 AM AEST
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Ouch! That last stanza really stings Jenni!

This was brimming with emotion and so torturous to
the soul to read, for I feel most of us have seen both
sides of this coin. It's sad and desperate, either way.

Excellent post, my friend. Very well written!

~Breezy

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 11th April 2008 @ 11:37:56 AM AEST
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Wow..really packed with emotions.. loved this...
Jenni_K

Re: inside your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by xxILoveTheSilencexx on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 12:37:06 PM AEST
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I know exactly what this means.....
you think it's real and fins out it's all a lie....and that sux....
nice job
=)

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