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A wound still cutting from far inside
Nothing to cause this deep rooted pain
But the memory that it's still in vain
Years have gone by without speaking a word
Not one single thing from him I've heard
So how can he still have an effect on me
For years, his face, I've not even seen
Although he still haunts my dreams
Reminding me nothing's as it seems
And deep inside I still love him
As the past fades away, becoming dim
The memories are fuzzy, his face still clear
I wonder if he knows he'll always be near
But I guess it doesn't matter, he'll never know the truth
About how what we had, I still hold onto
And maybe it's meant to be that way
Am I in his thoughts everyday? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 24 [informant] => cuttersangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Unforgettable Shadow

Contributed by cuttersangel on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 05:19:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

A mirror reflection I still despise
A wound still cutting from far inside
Nothing to cause this deep rooted pain
But the memory that it's still in vain
Years have gone by without speaking a word
Not one single thing from him I've heard
So how can he still have an effect on me
For years, his face, I've not even seen
Although he still haunts my dreams
Reminding me nothing's as it seems
And deep inside I still love him
As the past fades away, becoming dim
The memories are fuzzy, his face still clear
I wonder if he knows he'll always be near
But I guess it doesn't matter, he'll never know the truth
About how what we had, I still hold onto
And maybe it's meant to be that way
Am I in his thoughts everyday?

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Re: Unforgettable Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Xbxg32000 on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 07:15:21 AM AEST
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Wow, I really felt the emotion in this. I totally love this poem...it's so saddening yet beautiful. I love it! Great job! Please do keep writing, you have exceptional talent :).

Re: Unforgettable Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 08:02:32 AM AEST
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Deep InnerVision

Re: Unforgettable Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 05:38:57 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful sad piece of poetry.. very heart felt. you can feel the pain in this. I too have felt this way in my past but i over came it.. its time to let him go. you will find someone who gives you the love you deserve.

Good job

Vampyress Jenni

Re: Unforgettable Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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Good write. You could feel the longing and the aching in the heart. I liked how you ended the piece with that powerful question...

"Am I in his thoughts everyday?"

Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura

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