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Array ( [sid] => 135662 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Breath Taking View [time] => 2007-07-01 20:33:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A Breath Taking View

A breath taking view, is just what I see
when I am looking right at you
You cannot imagine, the feelings that arise
by the things you say and what you do

I become completely mesmerized
totally, at your beck and call
Whatever is needed by you
no matter how large or small

You are a very special lady
with a heart of gold
Truly a wonder, in this world
and what a sight to behold

A thrill in itself, just to be near you
in your arms, sets me on fire
As I look into your eyes
what is created, a burning desire

I love you, I love You
is all that's on my mind
A wondrous treasure
with everything combined [comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 2 [informant] => bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

A Breath Taking View

Contributed by bruce on Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 08:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A Breath Taking View

A breath taking view, is just what I see
when I am looking right at you
You cannot imagine, the feelings that arise
by the things you say and what you do

I become completely mesmerized
totally, at your beck and call
Whatever is needed by you
no matter how large or small

You are a very special lady
with a heart of gold
Truly a wonder, in this world
and what a sight to behold

A thrill in itself, just to be near you
in your arms, sets me on fire
As I look into your eyes
what is created, a burning desire

I love you, I love You
is all that's on my mind
A wondrous treasure
with everything combined

Copyright © bruce ... [ 2007-07-01 20:33:45]
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Re: A Breath Taking View (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 03:54:18 AM AEST
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It is wonderful to read the glory of a heart filled with love. Wonderful job.Never get tired of love poems.

Re: A Breath Taking View (User Rating: 1 )
by Poess on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 10:35:24 AM AEST
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What a great love poem.
I would love to have someone who cared enough about me to put it into a loving poem.
I'm sure she loved it.

Re: A Breath Taking View (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:14:57 AM AEST
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Once again........ this poem takes the readers breath away. May your union you smiled upon by the love gods each and every day.

Michelle

Re: A Breath Taking View (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 4th March 2019 @ 10:02:19 PM AEST
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Another great write!

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