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Is It you or is it me?
Contributed by
lowman613
on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Is it you, or is it me,
that keeps our love alive?
All I know & all I see,
Is the love we both strive,
It doesnt matter which one loves more,
only that we do,
our relationship I will always adore,
because it's inspired by you,
Not having you by my side,
would be my fear,
our love could never be denied,
it is so very clear,
Is It you, or is it me,
That keeps our love alive,
all I know it's my destiny,
To forever be your wife.
Copyright ©
lowman613
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2003-03-01 12:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Is It you or is it me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 04:27:12 PM AEST (User
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Christina, so beautifully done, brought out alot in each verse, hope your husband saw this, maybe he'll buy you "roses", thanks for sharing this |
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Re: Is It you or is it me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:46:04 PM AEST (User
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good write beautiful your love shines through in this one. I think it is both of you that keep your love alive
Shari |
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Re: Is It you or is it me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lone_er on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:49:41 AM AEST (User
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Wonderfully written maam. And an age old question we all ask at one time or another in marriage, I think. Godbless |
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Re: Is It you or is it me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by sunflower on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 04:39:39 PM AEST (User
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destined soulmates.......so nice to find eachother and speak of in poems, nice writing |
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Re: Is It you or is it me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 07:21:17 PM AEST (User
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love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own, such a beautiful poem christina, hugs and love to you and yours always nessa
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