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Array ( [sid] => 135623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything and Nothing [time] => 2007-06-29 08:41:21 [hometext] => The first of many comeback poems. I'm staging a comeback from my hiatus from writing. I need your support. Therefore if you post a comment I will post a comment on one of your poems. Please take five minutes or less out of your life to read this. [bodytext] => Cause we got everything,
Cause we got nothing
to lose.
That is probably what makes it seem
right.
That is probably why I dream,
right?

All I have right now is tonight.
A white knuckled grip
on the steering wheel
steering straight into the cold steel.

Cause you never know what'll happen next.
So remember what happened before
Before it's all to late.

Cause we got everything,
Cause we got nothing
to lose.
That is probably what makes it seem
right.
That is probably why I dream,
right?

Oh, cause we all don't want to be alone.
Cause we are all searching for home.
Looking and searching for excuses.

All I want to find is a piece of time
that I can call unique
that I can call mine.

Cause we got everything,
Cause we got nothing
to lose.
That is probably what makes it seem
right.
That is probably why I dream,
right?

Probably. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 21 [informant] => moses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Everything and Nothing

Contributed by moses on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 08:41:21 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Cause we got everything,
Cause we got nothing
to lose.
That is probably what makes it seem
right.
That is probably why I dream,
right?

All I have right now is tonight.
A white knuckled grip
on the steering wheel
steering straight into the cold steel.

Cause you never know what'll happen next.
So remember what happened before
Before it's all to late.

Cause we got everything,
Cause we got nothing
to lose.
That is probably what makes it seem
right.
That is probably why I dream,
right?

Oh, cause we all don't want to be alone.
Cause we are all searching for home.
Looking and searching for excuses.

All I want to find is a piece of time
that I can call unique
that I can call mine.

Cause we got everything,
Cause we got nothing
to lose.
That is probably what makes it seem
right.
That is probably why I dream,
right?

Probably.

Copyright © moses ... [ 2007-06-29 08:41:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Everything and Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Poess on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 10:14:25 AM AEST
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I like this. I was kinda lost in a couple spots...but I'm used to poetry that rhymes throughout.
Great read....I love the lines about needing time for you.

Re: Everything and Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 05:54:34 AM AEST
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this is a good emotional felt write.. you can feel the confusion and highs and lows in this.. it reminds me of a song in ways.. great job

Vampyress Jenni

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