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Array ( [sid] => 135588 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming Of Being Free [time] => 2007-06-27 12:17:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Been having a dream
that I was
slowly
moving in a groove
where I knew what to do.

Something was telling me
was that eventually
that everything
goes wrong
there's nothing I can do
but let it go,
the secret is
I gotta relax
and just let life flow.

No words could ever explain
the way I feel
when there is no pain
I am laughing and interacting again
and I
feel secure with the reaction
although some think I am strange
as I walk away
from the things
that use to fill me with rage.

I am starting to dream
that I can really be
free. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 21 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Dreaming Of Being Free

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Been having a dream
that I was
slowly
moving in a groove
where I knew what to do.

Something was telling me
was that eventually
that everything
goes wrong
there's nothing I can do
but let it go,
the secret is
I gotta relax
and just let life flow.

No words could ever explain
the way I feel
when there is no pain
I am laughing and interacting again
and I
feel secure with the reaction
although some think I am strange
as I walk away
from the things
that use to fill me with rage.

I am starting to dream
that I can really be
free.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-06-27 12:17:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dreaming Of Being Free (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:25:14 PM AEST
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Me too man, me too....just dreaming to be free. I really loved your last sentence. Nice write.
Peace,
Laura

Re: Dreaming Of Being Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:08:23 PM AEST
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very insightful write, good work I really enjoy these reads. Vincent

Re: Dreaming Of Being Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 05:31:50 PM AEST
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I loved this!
In acceptance there is true peace to be found, working with the rhythm rather than always trying to fight against it.
The last stanza is beautiful in its simplicity and sincerity.

As always a pleasure to read your work,

Dom

Re: Dreaming Of Being Free (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 08:07:24 AM AEST
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How wonderful to read a piece with hope. To finally get to that place where peace is found. An excellent inspiring write.

Re: Dreaming Of Being Free (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 12:09:11 PM AEST
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A beautifull write, Tony.
You jus gotta believe even in the midst of turmoil.
Keep the faith and hang tuff.
Awesome writing.
Mucho luv,
emy

Re: Dreaming Of Being Free (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 12:29:51 PM AEST
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fantastic write, i wish i could feel free too. It sucks always being on the go or having stress about something...o well keep it up :D

Jenni xxoo

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