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Array ( [sid] => 135579 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => oblivious in shame [time] => 2007-06-27 02:46:58 [hometext] => this is about my friend and some other stuff mixed in.. its pretty deep enjoy everyone [bodytext] => Everytime I get so far
You take another piece of me
smash it in my face

I am not merely worth enough to you
Everything good I've given to you

You turn me away
making all my days turn black

Specialness from you
I so much lack

Into a lonley unworthy oblivion
my soul will crash
the pain deepens as this love is cheapend

Returning from where I came
because you don't even feel any shame

taking my hand
you lead me to that empty space (so familiar)
so familiar it devours me whole
sinking in singing to drown

Remember this before I wither down

I love you the same
even though you don't know my real name

Vampyress Jenni [comments] => 4 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

oblivious in shame

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:46:58 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Everytime I get so far
You take another piece of me
smash it in my face

I am not merely worth enough to you
Everything good I've given to you

You turn me away
making all my days turn black

Specialness from you
I so much lack

Into a lonley unworthy oblivion
my soul will crash
the pain deepens as this love is cheapend

Returning from where I came
because you don't even feel any shame

taking my hand
you lead me to that empty space (so familiar)
so familiar it devours me whole
sinking in singing to drown

Remember this before I wither down

I love you the same
even though you don't know my real name

Vampyress Jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-06-27 02:46:58]
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Re: oblivious in shame (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 08:07:50 AM AEST
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god Jenni, that was some deep schtuff. I really could feel your emotions, so raw, in this write. The ending was almost like a burn sis....

"I love you the same
even though you don't know my real name"

...a burn in the meaning that it seems as though this feeling, this hurt is lingering within you. Hope all is well.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: oblivious in shame (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:37:30 PM AEST
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Oh Jen it seems someone is not treating you right... sad emotive write my friend

Michelle

Re: oblivious in shame (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 08:27:45 AM AEST
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Friends can sometimes miss your value and yes really push their limits. Lots of feelings here and sounds like you've had enough of this friends behaviour. Tolerance can be easy to learn with some friends. A good write that I think anyone can relate to with these kind of friends.

Re: oblivious in shame (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 11:54:33 AM AEST
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I get the same feeling michelle does from this be carfule cause the internet is not the place for love just to many triksters jenn if it's gonna happen and it's gonna be real it must be in the real world u sound hurt and that's sad cause your a real down 2 earth person beautiful write no less my friend . . .

Ben

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