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Array ( [sid] => 135575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Vulnerable [time] => 2007-06-27 00:56:20 [hometext] => Was just feeling really low now...not my best...but still wanted to write something! [bodytext] => As I see you kiss him
I feel angry...
As I see him hugging you
I feel hurt...
As I see two happy faces
I feel disgusted...

Why do you leave me so vulnerable?
Why am i so powerless?
Why on earth did it all go wrong?

I hate those 7 words you say
Sorry I am just your friend now...
I hate those 7 words you say...
I think I have feelings for someone
I hate those 7 words you say..
I dont see us being together again...

Why do you leave me so vulnerable?
Why am I so powerless?
Why on earth did it all go wrong?

I guess I need to move on...
Life is beautiful it just goes on...
Just remember what i gave you was pure love...
And thats why I never hurt you...the one I truly loved... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => madhusudan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

So Vulnerable

Contributed by madhusudan on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:56:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I see you kiss him
I feel angry...
As I see him hugging you
I feel hurt...
As I see two happy faces
I feel disgusted...

Why do you leave me so vulnerable?
Why am i so powerless?
Why on earth did it all go wrong?

I hate those 7 words you say
Sorry I am just your friend now...
I hate those 7 words you say...
I think I have feelings for someone
I hate those 7 words you say..
I dont see us being together again...

Why do you leave me so vulnerable?
Why am I so powerless?
Why on earth did it all go wrong?

I guess I need to move on...
Life is beautiful it just goes on...
Just remember what i gave you was pure love...
And thats why I never hurt you...the one I truly loved...

Copyright © madhusudan ... [ 2007-06-27 00:56:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: So Vulnerable (User Rating: 1 )
by Poess on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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I like this. I just caught my fiance and man of 10 years cheating on me with tons of girls online (after 3 kids!)
I can feel the pain in this. Good read.

Re: So Vulnerable (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 02:39:56 PM AEST
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awwwwww my heart goes out to you, I loved the 7 words that added to this . The pain is so clear and you have me feeling it I also undertand it I hope your tears dry and your heart heals.

Michellle

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