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Array ( [sid] => 135473 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Shall I Do [time] => 2007-06-23 11:46:15 [hometext] => The first part was a blog posted by Travis, the second part is my response. [bodytext] => -What shall we use to fill the empty spaces
where we used to talk?
How shall i fill the final places?
How shall i complete the wall?-
-Travis P.

-we shall write to fill those empty spaces
and together we will fill the final places
and the wall your building i'll knock down
doesnt matter im no longer a part of this town

you and me boy we've got a history
but somethings need to remain a mystery
i'll be back someday and i'll be someone
we'll hang out again and have all the fun.

they'll look at us and wonder why
we dance in the rain and look at the sky
so what if we arent in love we're better than that
lets be best friends forever no questions asked.-
-Charlee H.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 16 [informant] => dinosauruscharlee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

What Shall I Do

Contributed by dinosauruscharlee on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 11:46:15 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

-What shall we use to fill the empty spaces
where we used to talk?
How shall i fill the final places?
How shall i complete the wall?-
-Travis P.

-we shall write to fill those empty spaces
and together we will fill the final places
and the wall your building i'll knock down
doesnt matter im no longer a part of this town

you and me boy we've got a history
but somethings need to remain a mystery
i'll be back someday and i'll be someone
we'll hang out again and have all the fun.

they'll look at us and wonder why
we dance in the rain and look at the sky
so what if we arent in love we're better than that
lets be best friends forever no questions asked.-
-Charlee H.

Copyright © dinosauruscharlee ... [ 2007-06-23 11:46:15]
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Re: What Shall I Do (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 01:23:35 PM AEST
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I loved this write, building walls and knocking them down, dancing in rain looking at clouds geezzzzzz just the type of write I needed making me smile.

Michelle

Re: What Shall I Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Cindy359 on Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 04:08:50 PM AEST
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A real good write here...waiting for more, come on don't make us wait too long.
Cindy

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