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Array ( [sid] => 135469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For the Other Not Me [time] => 2007-06-23 07:04:30 [hometext] => A thought ever lasting [bodytext] => Release

Release me of the thoughts
I aught not have
The cries I hear in my ears
The moans and whins I can not fix
I am helpless watching from both far and near

Release Me
Dear Lord I pray for
Peace
For the Other
I have no fear knowing that you
Are with me

Release
My body of all the sickness I bare
I ask not for myself
But for the others
I Need to help
I ask for the strength for the forth
Coming
I ask not
Just for myself

Release
All my demons now resting
I can feel them boilin
They will bubble up and spill over
And then the illusion will be up

Release me of these responsiabilies
Let me chose who I need to help more

The family front is fine
But the others are grey
Release my heart of these felt
Obiligations

I know I owe them not
But Obiligations
A long ago spoken promise
I can not lie
I am left with nothing
but You Lord
Asking every night

Help him
Help
Him I pray
The lighthouse
In my life.
That was there so long
ago



Whisper

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For the Other Not Me

Contributed by whisper on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 07:04:30 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Release

Release me of the thoughts
I aught not have
The cries I hear in my ears
The moans and whins I can not fix
I am helpless watching from both far and near

Release Me
Dear Lord I pray for
Peace
For the Other
I have no fear knowing that you
Are with me

Release
My body of all the sickness I bare
I ask not for myself
But for the others
I Need to help
I ask for the strength for the forth
Coming
I ask not
Just for myself

Release
All my demons now resting
I can feel them boilin
They will bubble up and spill over
And then the illusion will be up

Release me of these responsiabilies
Let me chose who I need to help more

The family front is fine
But the others are grey
Release my heart of these felt
Obiligations

I know I owe them not
But Obiligations
A long ago spoken promise
I can not lie
I am left with nothing
but You Lord
Asking every night

Help him
Help
Him I pray
The lighthouse
In my life.
That was there so long
ago



Whisper





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Re: For the Other Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 07:58:12 AM AEST
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A prayer that I am sure the universe will hear.
For before it is asked your strength and faith will grant each and every word. Remain strong and continue to write with such awareness.


Re: For the Other Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 08:00:50 AM AEST
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moving write

NS


Re: For the Other Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 01:25:32 AM AEST
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Release, the deepest prayer of an anquished heart. A wish, a desire to no longer feel if all we can feel is pain. I think you captured this idea well. With a great flow and utter poetic ideas. A work well worth the read. I do pray you find a release one that keeps you here with us writing about the wonders one day.

BRAVO!

SCM


Re: For the Other Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 06:52:10 AM AEST
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i loved this,and i feel i can relate a bit ;/

nice job


Re: For the Other Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 10:25:18 AM AEST
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Thank you All
for the coments and the read.
* I am having comp problems to email direct


Whisper


Re: For the Other Not Me (User Rating: 1 )
by inlovewithaladd on Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 09:38:45 AM AEST
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nice.




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