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Array ( [sid] => 135466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a friend in need is a friend indeed [time] => 2007-06-23 05:30:20 [hometext] => you know who ya are and this 1 for you ..... [bodytext] => Heartless, cold, cruel, evil
Has been said to describe me
All true and I’ll admit
But that’s only when you cross me

I would teach you to fish
In cold take the shirt off my back
Never ask return
Your empire can grow!
I am just in the shadows with a match

Please, no tears, keep up the tuff guy act
What? I’m to remain idle as u twist fact

I dream
You die a slow ,painful death
Gag on your last breath
You could be covered in in flames
I wouldn’t urinate on your burning flesh

Do not get it mizz/unda/stood !

You could be dieing of dehydration
In the last day of a drought
I’d watch smiling , sipping Dear Park
And wouldn’t spit in your mouth

What is it that you say?
“Karma will get you”
I reply with smiles and a O.K.

I figure why wait for karma’s tomorrow
When you can enjoy the revenge of today!
Is it half empty or half full
It’s something in the damn glass is what I say
You can see things how you like
But it is what it is either way

You are nothing do the world a favor
Please jump right now!!
What, I hurt your feelings? I’m not sorry
Tell “karma” I still live on brown

It’s all about you, right?
Because its time for a change
This was written all for you
Did u get it? Or do I have to name names

“Damn/u/iz/a/ugly/1”
Is what the devil will probably say
When I kick open the gates of hell
Yelling “make mutha ****** way”

No Worries No fear
No Love [comments] => 2 [counter] => 318 [topic] => 14 [informant] => evolon [notes] => Poem edited. Please star out the whole word and do not try to fool the word filters. Thankyou. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
a friend in need is a friend indeed

Contributed by evolon on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 05:30:20 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Heartless, cold, cruel, evil
Has been said to describe me
All true and I’ll admit
But that’s only when you cross me

I would teach you to fish
In cold take the shirt off my back
Never ask return
Your empire can grow!
I am just in the shadows with a match

Please, no tears, keep up the tuff guy act
What? I’m to remain idle as u twist fact

I dream
You die a slow ,painful death
Gag on your last breath
You could be covered in in flames
I wouldn’t urinate on your burning flesh

Do not get it mizz/unda/stood !

You could be dieing of dehydration
In the last day of a drought
I’d watch smiling , sipping Dear Park
And wouldn’t spit in your mouth

What is it that you say?
“Karma will get you”
I reply with smiles and a O.K.

I figure why wait for karma’s tomorrow
When you can enjoy the revenge of today!
Is it half empty or half full
It’s something in the damn glass is what I say
You can see things how you like
But it is what it is either way

You are nothing do the world a favor
Please jump right now!!
What, I hurt your feelings? I’m not sorry
Tell “karma” I still live on brown

It’s all about you, right?
Because its time for a change
This was written all for you
Did u get it? Or do I have to name names

“Damn/u/iz/a/ugly/1”
Is what the devil will probably say
When I kick open the gates of hell
Yelling “make mutha ****** way”

No Worries No fear
No Love




Copyright © evolon ... [ 2007-06-23 05:30:20]
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Re: a friend in need is a friend indeed (User Rating: 1 )
by StephaniePaige on Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 06:22:09 AM AEST
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I loved the sarcastic title, it made this all the more enjoyable since it wasn't what I expected.


Re: a friend in need is a friend indeed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 12:01:13 PM AEST
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The Ghost Alarms find this piece ghetto-goth-fabulous! We pull our hoods over our faces, covering our eyes and taking our right hands, make the shape a gun with our fingers. Then we extend our arms and slowly slide them out in rhythm to the left. The one on the furthest left, uses his left arm and points to the right, showing us that even though many guns may be blazing, he who is overlooked could still have a draw on you. While we are not fond of modern slang, we did find this to be very interesting and it will probably be mizz/unda/stood, homey. We sense much anger in you, and this is a good thing, because it leads to the dark side. But to be like us, the Ghost Alarms, you must find the beauty in the darkness and not reveal in the anguish of it. Regardless of this, we do salute your poetic effort, and this is a broad salute, for we are many.

May you get a ghoulish offer you can't refuse .... The Ghost Alarms





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