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[title] => Just a Dream
[time] => 2007-06-21 15:57:52
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I wish you could be honest
and tell me all the reasons why
I'll wait a lifetime if that's what it takes
for you to trust and feelings you'll not deny
I wish you could spit it out
why you made the choices you did
You give me excuses I don't understand
They seem shallow...real reasons left hid
Is it so hard to admit
there was something wrong
Why did honesty become so hard for you
The road in this marriage so long
I wish I could freeze the time
Go back and fix things right
Close my eyes and it all be a dream
Just a dream, one restless night
6-16-07
Laura Horner
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Just a Dream
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deadheadpoet
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Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 03:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish you could be honest
and tell me all the reasons why
I'll wait a lifetime if that's what it takes
for you to trust and feelings you'll not deny
I wish you could spit it out
why you made the choices you did
You give me excuses I don't understand
They seem shallow...real reasons left hid
Is it so hard to admit
there was something wrong
Why did honesty become so hard for you
The road in this marriage so long
I wish I could freeze the time
Go back and fix things right
Close my eyes and it all be a dream
Just a dream, one restless night
6-16-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 04:01:48 PM AEST
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| i can feel the ache that's pouring out of this poem, it was written very well...it was real and honest, keep it up |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST
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sis,
this is so darn sad, I hope that you find the answers and your heart can find a way to mend from this heartache
Michelle |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 04:14:02 PM AEST
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The sadness is felt from beginning to end in this write. May your heart one day once again be filled with the peace and joy that you seek.
sadaddy |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 07:15:53 PM AEST
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I agree with Michelle sis this is just sad and i feel that your hurting somehow.
I am here for you Laurabean.
Big hugs |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 07:33:32 PM AEST
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| Very sad but beautifully written.I hope things work out for you |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 12:04:53 AM AEST
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Sweet and gentle laura.. hun I know the darkness is overwhelming.
And it can be all consuming when answers lie obscure and all you are
left holding are damn nagging questions ...
I hope that as time moves, wounds heal and answers become aware,
and that all the love and faith you've shown returns to you TENfold!
You deserve all the happiness in the world, sis.
I'm so glad you have both the wits and the skill to at least express
some of your frustrations out on paper. The written word is a never-
ending therapeutic venue ~
In all admiration and with much respect,
Peace and love,
~MG
(PM or phone call away ...) |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 11:47:42 AM AEST
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The anguish held herein is heart wrenching
& makes my soul shutter w/ it's intensity,
still, there is one thing that it's not...
Insurmountable!!!
Please believe that...
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme
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Re: Just a Dream
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 12:35:16 PM AEST
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I admire your courage my sister laura to even write at this point in your life, no it won't go away not right away the only thing one can do is face off with the one who hurt you and let them explain, a carthasus is what's needed here for both of you, get at the answers via
the reasons there were question that just maybey should have been asked in the first place. good luck to you but be carfule, go to the source laura . . .
((((peace 2u my sister)))))
Ben
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Re: Just a Dream
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by Dom on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 04:58:39 PM AEST
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Oh, hun, I'm really sorry to hear that you're going through such heartache. I hope you can sort things out.
The anguish in this, such a powerful and intense poem, it nearly reduced me to tears!
Sending hugs your way,
Dom |
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Re: Just a Dream
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 09:05:28 AM AEST
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| This must be so painful for you Laura. I wish nothing but peace and comfort to you. I wish to see your pain washed away. I know that time gives relief from pain but the time seems endless. I am so glad you continue to write and share. You have so many here who love you. We are here with you always. All I can send to you right at this moment is strength..and the knowingness that you are fully aware how incredible you are. |
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