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[title] => A Title Might Take Away From the Intended Meaning of this Poem
[time] => 2007-06-21 15:52:52
[hometext] => at my final breath, will your face be the last thing I see?
[bodytext] => "A Title Might Take Away From the Intended Meaning of This Poem" So there I was in a place of devastation Where the rain seemed to fall like mortality to death And the darkness swept across the sky like a horde of spiders making their way to their prey And there was no brilliant choir to accompany the darkness The only melody was that of a soul long tortured But thru the darkness I could see a maiden, A maiden that shown with the most fantastical colours! Colours that flew about like an array of spirits! Spirits which possessed every ounce of my being And I did not struggle against them, I simply succumbed to them I was a hostage who willingly gave up control So I began to press my way thru the emptiness, towards the beautiful and radiant maiden And with every step that I began to take I could feel the existence of fear rise up, constricting the flow of life to the lungs Until my chest seemed to burst into flames! Then suddenly my eyes hit head on with hers And they struck with such force that I found myself upon the ground And, for just a moment, my vital signs ceased to exist And there I layed in a peace that I had never known A peace where every little thing dissolved away But the moment soon ended and I found myself re-animated I stood up...and there in-front of me she was, The one who possessed an un-rivaled beauty, A beauty that had never before been witnessed by mine eyes But then anxiety set in and nailed my body into the ground And as I tried to stretch out my arms or whisper a breath She began to fade away into the darkness As I stuggled to eject a truth from my body She continued to fade away... And the further she went away The more beautiful she became And the more beautiful she became The more jealousy over-threw my heart Because she faded out of my grasp And into the arms of another soul One that was a little more stable [comments] => 5 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 13 [informant] => asthenia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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