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[aid] => mick
[title] => Shane Part II from Bold and the Beautiful
[time] => 2007-06-20 11:00:06
[hometext] => based on character Shane from soap Bold and the Beautiful about his tragic end to his life on the show and hopefully important life lessons learned also included God since I want to do a good purpose for the Lord in writing my poems
[bodytext] => Shane Part II So sad what happened to Shane He wasn't so bad just suffered from emotional pain I really diged him and thought him quite catching He was good looking to the brim with a body quite chiseling At first he looked beastly & scary And he wasn't exactly the brightest He did seem quite the opportunist But falling in love really changed him He started being nice & sweet to the brim It was so tragic how he went so frantic He got so steamed Yet he wasn't mean He just lacked self-esteem The Morone's & the Forrester's mostly put him down treating him like crap on the ground The poor sap didn't stand a chance to gain advance Now Ridge in all this has learned a big lesson Bet he wishes his confrontation never happened If only sooner he'd offered his help and support And then to anger & violence Shane wouldn't felt compelled to resort None of the Morone's or Forrester's treated Shane right So now Ridge may pay the price All them rich folks didn't care if Shane had a dime so now Ridge might have to do time Poor Shane was made to feel like he wasn't even worth to exist first by Ridge and even worse by Nick Most of them thought they were better They lacked for nothing & had plenty whilst Shane's wallet laid empty They were to selfish and busy to care if he was suffering and starving No wonder he got so angry People need to learn better lessons that they may take more positive action to always keep in mind a good practice is to be kind A better chance they willl have God will bless them so they'll make it into Heaven [comments] => 0 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 75 [informant] => visionarybee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
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