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Gonna be a cowboy,
ride a big horse
wear six-guns and a hat, of course;
break my back in endless toil
dried up bones in desert soi - Whoa!

Gonna be a big star,
stage and screen
more charisma than ever been seen;
finish my days drugged and hazy
surrounded by cats, fat and laz - Cut!

Gonna be President
of the whooole world
adored by crowds, flag unfurled,
last days in a bunker, on the run
mob at the door as I eat my gu - Click!

Gonna be me,
whoever that is
no cardboard version of someone else;
spend my life doing all kinda things
that’s how I’m gonna earn my - Wings!

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Guidance, Counsellor

Contributed by spike on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 10:43:38 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Gonna be a cowboy,
ride a big horse
wear six-guns and a hat, of course;
break my back in endless toil
dried up bones in desert soi - Whoa!

Gonna be a big star,
stage and screen
more charisma than ever been seen;
finish my days drugged and hazy
surrounded by cats, fat and laz - Cut!

Gonna be President
of the whooole world
adored by crowds, flag unfurled,
last days in a bunker, on the run
mob at the door as I eat my gu - Click!

Gonna be me,
whoever that is
no cardboard version of someone else;
spend my life doing all kinda things
that’s how I’m gonna earn my - Wings!

Copyright Â© spike ... [ 2007-06-18 22:43:38]
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Re: Guidance, Counsellor (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:25:42 PM AEST
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S,

this was fun and inspirational. I got caught up in the beat,
but the message is what I really love about this ..
how perfectly titled as well. There is always a deep
wisdom inside each of your writes, clever poet.

(The picture is gorgeous and adds to the 'wings' theme)

soaring high ~

~B

Re: Guidance, Counsellor (User Rating: 1 )
by Linds on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 01:02:02 AM AEST
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aw i really like this. It's sort of different than i've ever read before, i realy like it. It flows really well.

Re: Guidance, Counsellor (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 02:40:41 AM AEST
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I think this one has succeeded to top the charts In all your work I have read....What an awsome write!

I love it..Very very beautiful!

Bravo!!!!

Re: Guidance, Counsellor (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 02:49:28 AM AEST
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this is a very fun yet inspiring write.. I like the flow and how it went to different things.. very well done

Vampyress Jenni

Re: Guidance, Counsellor (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 10:17:44 PM AEST
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Very creative, thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy

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