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Array ( [sid] => 135338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Part I - Conversations With Merlin [time] => 2007-06-18 13:42:51 [hometext] => Chapter Three ~ Morning Star [bodytext] =>

In my mirror, for Merlin I again seek.
This meeting of ours numbered three...

The vision in my mind is so intense!
I almost lose my focus of balance.

I can feel her rapid breath
as once again she fears death.

Terrified - running away!
So afraid.

Again shamed.
And betrayed.

By one she loved and held dear.
Hot and soulful were her tears.

Trusting her needs
planting loves seeds
she once again fell as prey
to the Wolf; in whose arms she lay

Her young were taken from her grasp,
her soul aching as her memory lapsed.

As MoningStar her ally and closest friend,
pulled her into another dimension
where she lay and wept
her young were kept
where she now could not return
without receiving the branding burn!

Which she could not take
until healed from the stake
she now felt the searing pain
between her wings bloodstained.

Soaking her flesh
and the ground below
"Go by what ye know!"

As she knew the way before,
he then said, "As the four-
Not by what ye need!
As ye evoke this greed!

Then said he; "Now we must seek a third,
change direction as another debt we incur.
To return your young to hearth
we must walk lightly upon the earth."

"As your friend, this I speak to you
for ye will heal my Dragon Blue!"

"Though thy karmic debt ‘tis now paid,
another path of strife be laid
for we must split a space in time
Along the unstable fault line

Off the path meant for thee
Of which ye sense

Yet cannot see"
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 40 [informant] => dragonblue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Part I - Conversations With Merlin

Contributed by dragonblue on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 01:42:51 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

In my mirror, for Merlin I again seek.
This meeting of ours numbered three...

The vision in my mind is so intense!
I almost lose my focus of balance.

I can feel her rapid breath
as once again she fears death.

Terrified - running away!
So afraid.

Again shamed.
And betrayed.

By one she loved and held dear.
Hot and soulful were her tears.

Trusting her needs
planting loves seeds
she once again fell as prey
to the Wolf; in whose arms she lay

Her young were taken from her grasp,
her soul aching as her memory lapsed.

As MoningStar her ally and closest friend,
pulled her into another dimension
where she lay and wept
her young were kept
where she now could not return
without receiving the branding burn!

Which she could not take
until healed from the stake
she now felt the searing pain
between her wings bloodstained.

Soaking her flesh
and the ground below
"Go by what ye know!"

As she knew the way before,
he then said, "As the four-
Not by what ye need!
As ye evoke this greed!

Then said he; "Now we must seek a third,
change direction as another debt we incur.
To return your young to hearth
we must walk lightly upon the earth."

"As your friend, this I speak to you
for ye will heal my Dragon Blue!"

"Though thy karmic debt ‘tis now paid,
another path of strife be laid
for we must split a space in time
Along the unstable fault line

Off the path meant for thee
Of which ye sense

Yet cannot see"

Copyright Â© dragonblue ... [ 2007-06-18 13:42:51]
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Re: Part I - Conversations With Merlin (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 10:06:43 PM AEST
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An awsome write,,,BRILLIANT!!!

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