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Array ( [sid] => 135327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Wish I was A Star [time] => 2007-06-18 05:02:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish I were a star just hanging,

Chilling long side the

Moon..

I wish I may I wish I might just

Chilling with the heavenly stars

Neighbors

I wish I may I wish I might make you

My perfect friends

Just hanging, chilling shooting the

Breeze..

I wish I may I wish I might gaze down

From the blacken

Skies…

Scattering gold dust around your feet

I wish I may I wish I might make

Friends with the

Moon..
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I Wish I was A Star

Contributed by honey56 on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 05:02:53 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I wish I were a star just hanging,

Chilling long side the

Moon..

I wish I may I wish I might just

Chilling with the heavenly stars

Neighbors

I wish I may I wish I might make you

My perfect friends

Just hanging, chilling shooting the

Breeze..

I wish I may I wish I might gaze down

From the blacken

Skies…

Scattering gold dust around your feet

I wish I may I wish I might make

Friends with the

Moon..

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2007-06-18 05:02:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 07:17:35 AM AEST
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A very good write though on a personal note I am not fond of the word "chilling" in the context you have used it. This doesn't take from the poem however because it is only my personal feeling. I enjoyed the sentiment and flow very much. Good Job.

Splendid!

SCM

Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:02:24 AM AEST
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Enjoy it alot.
thanks for sharing :)

Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:03:26 AM AEST
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It is an universal dream for every poet to be closed to the moon up in the dark sky - and you my poet friend, have illustrated it with perfection.
well written.
FRANCO.

Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:56:25 PM AEST
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What a lovely thought ... to blend yourself among the moon
and stars ... *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh* how gorgeous a thought is that!!?

(Don't like the "shooting the Breeze" bit though ... lol j/k)

Overall a very beautiful, image-filled write. So light and airy ..
like a dream ~

~Breezy

Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 09:33:15 PM AEST
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A lovely poem. Gives me a peaceful feeling
but at the same time left me wondering why
you wish your were a star. You never seem
to tell your reason but that's perfectly alright.
It just leaves me with a a bit of curiosity which
gives the poem that little extra something.
Lovely work , Truly , Doug

Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:54:44 PM AEST
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Hugely enjoyable sentiment; gave me a nice lift under rainy skies in Sydney. Personally, I take any opportunity to get away with saying 'just chill'n with the homies' - alas, there are not many...

Spike

Re: I Wish I was A Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 6th October 2007 @ 08:07:47 AM AEST
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A relaxing and calming read.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us all

Steve

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