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Array ( [sid] => 135306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal Void [time] => 2007-06-17 09:16:27 [hometext] => Written about all the people ive known and lost over the years, there are so many! Some dead, others just gone. It hurts, and sometimes I want to go too. [bodytext] => The rain falls,
soft against the window.
Creating watery patterns.
And in each one,
I see your face
before it silently falls away.
Like me.
Falling into a nightmare,
so deep
so eternal
that none can pull me back.
Haunted by ghosts,
of a past long forgotten.
I watch the sky,
the magic it holds.
To feel something so intense,
ended, before it began.
I stand outside,
unafraid,
in the rain.
Every drop like a pin,
falling, shredding my skin.
I want it to stop.
I want to cry out.
Instead, im OK,
being beaten by the rain.
It strips away my thoughts,
like a blade.
Until at last,
Immortal darkness prevails.
Peace in an eternal void.
Finally
I’m Gone.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Thespia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Eternal Void

Contributed by Thespia on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 09:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

The rain falls,
soft against the window.
Creating watery patterns.
And in each one,
I see your face
before it silently falls away.
Like me.
Falling into a nightmare,
so deep
so eternal
that none can pull me back.
Haunted by ghosts,
of a past long forgotten.
I watch the sky,
the magic it holds.
To feel something so intense,
ended, before it began.
I stand outside,
unafraid,
in the rain.
Every drop like a pin,
falling, shredding my skin.
I want it to stop.
I want to cry out.
Instead, im OK,
being beaten by the rain.
It strips away my thoughts,
like a blade.
Until at last,
Immortal darkness prevails.
Peace in an eternal void.
Finally
I’m Gone.

Copyright Â© Thespia ... [ 2007-06-17 09:16:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Eternal Void (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 12:34:08 PM AEST
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Im finding words hard right now, this is breath taking write, though sad such emotion..... THings I am feeling and understanding deeply at this very moment.

Thanks for sharing

hope all is fine with you soon

Michelle

Re: Eternal Void (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:34:38 PM AEST
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Very sad and emotional, there is a terrible sense of desolation in this poem, facing the rain alone that is heart-wrenching.

Take care,
Dom

Re: Eternal Void (User Rating: 1 )
by patp on Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:03:17 AM AEST
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Very well written but sad poem, good job

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