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Array ( [sid] => 135300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Footprints in the sands of time.. [time] => 2007-06-16 21:34:59 [hometext] => When someone we love leaves us, we tell them we will be waitin forever...and I realised God was tellin me the same...Loosely inspired by Footprints in the sands of time... [bodytext] => Me to her
Oh, how I dreamt that one day you will possess me,
How beautiful will you look when I ask for your hand,
As we walk, holding hands the ring will be shining,
Glistening, in the sun as we walk thro' the sand.

But the beach seems empty
I don't see anyone besides me?
Why do I not see your footprints in the sand?
Maybe you are gone but was I not worthy of your hand?

Be happy wherever you are, but if someone ever hurt you
During such times of despair, I will always carry you...


God to me
Remember when you were walking along the beach
What you gave her, is what I always preach
Love someone for what they are, not what you want them to be
I'm showin her the light, but for that she has to open her eye

And everytime you saw your footprint in the sand
and there was only one pair, she had already taken her stand
This is life and everything here happens for good
I'm proud of you, and I know you did all you could...

But when you needed me the most, dont think i left you
During such times of despair it was then that I carried you
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Footprints in the sands of time..

Contributed by madhusudan on Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 09:34:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Me to her
Oh, how I dreamt that one day you will possess me,
How beautiful will you look when I ask for your hand,
As we walk, holding hands the ring will be shining,
Glistening, in the sun as we walk thro' the sand.

But the beach seems empty
I don't see anyone besides me?
Why do I not see your footprints in the sand?
Maybe you are gone but was I not worthy of your hand?

Be happy wherever you are, but if someone ever hurt you
During such times of despair, I will always carry you...


God to me
Remember when you were walking along the beach
What you gave her, is what I always preach
Love someone for what they are, not what you want them to be
I'm showin her the light, but for that she has to open her eye

And everytime you saw your footprint in the sand
and there was only one pair, she had already taken her stand
This is life and everything here happens for good
I'm proud of you, and I know you did all you could...

But when you needed me the most, dont think i left you
During such times of despair it was then that I carried you




Copyright © madhusudan ... [ 2007-06-16 21:34:59]
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Re: Footprints in the sands of time.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 01:39:20 AM AEST
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I loved the footprints......

this is beautiful and hits me with alot of emotion today, made me shed a few tears.
Deeply moving poem.

Michelle


Re: Footprints in the sands of time.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 07:00:22 AM AEST
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Lovely write! Thanks for sharing.. ~~Oceandreamer~~


Re: Footprints in the sands of time.. (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:49:17 AM AEST
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this leaves a warm spot on the heart

Shari




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