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SO MANY DAYS WE GO

SO MANY MILES APART

SO MANY YEARS I HAVE WAITED

JUST TO BE WITH YOU

TO FEEL YOU IN MY ARMS

TO STEAL THAT FIRST KISS

TO FEEL YOU IN MY ARMS THREW THE NIGHT

SO MANY NIGHTS I HAVE DREAMED OF OUR HAPPYNESS

ONLY TO WAKE ALONE ONCE MORE

SOMEDAY SOON WE CAN BE TOGETHER

FOREVER MORE NEVER TO BE ALONE EVER AGAIN
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

MISSING YOU

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 01:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

SO MANY DAYS WE GO

SO MANY MILES APART

SO MANY YEARS I HAVE WAITED

JUST TO BE WITH YOU

TO FEEL YOU IN MY ARMS

TO STEAL THAT FIRST KISS

TO FEEL YOU IN MY ARMS THREW THE NIGHT

SO MANY NIGHTS I HAVE DREAMED OF OUR HAPPYNESS

ONLY TO WAKE ALONE ONCE MORE

SOMEDAY SOON WE CAN BE TOGETHER

FOREVER MORE NEVER TO BE ALONE EVER AGAIN

Copyright Â© MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-06-15 13:11:56]
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Re: MISSING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 02:49:30 AM AEST
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Wow, I can really relate to this right now...there is such a longing and a hope within your words...may all your forlorn nights be met with an ending soon! ~Tot

Re: MISSING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 09:16:28 AM AEST
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No offence, I found this poem to be very empty and found the capitalization to be quite obnoxious and childish. I can’t take what your saying seriously when everything is in caps. I’ve checked out a lot of your other poetry and I’m pretty much seeing all caps in all the others as well. Please, for your own sake, stop using caps. Also, it seems like you didn’t take much time to write this. I mean, i get what your poem means; it just came off rushed and hollow. I know these emotions are not hollow for you, so try to flesh out your poem so the reader can feel your pain. So try to break out of your mold, I can tell you can write great things you just need to find better ways to write it. Best of luck!

~D.S. Hammoulton~

Re: MISSING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 08:43:12 PM AEST
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I DONT AGREE WITH DSHammoulton ITS A LOVELY POEM AND CAN RELATE TO IT. XXX

Re: MISSING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 06:43:18 AM AEST
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i do not agree with them either. i felt you have poured more than heart into this write. do they feel the same for one who seems to be so inlove with another? i do not see many people pour out words so simple, and so undertanding for a reader to see. go get this person you speak of and never let go. good luck. i am hoping its felt for both sides.

endless

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