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[title] => Your Angel Wings
[time] => 2007-06-15 04:00:08
[hometext] => This was written for my beautiful, wise and compassionate poetsis...MisfitMe.
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You with your beautiful heart
With your beautiful soul
Opened up and revealed
things which lay hidden within
Things which tarnish ones' path
~~Those who judge
simply have not lived~~
Brave is what you are
You waited with baited breath
You watched to see
"How will she go
about this process?"
You saw me falter
Like a silkened vapor
you flew in
and caught me on
your angel wings
Oh my sweet sister
miles separate us
but the vibes of Earth do connect
and I feel you beating
Wings golden
Wings tarnished
Wings torn and mended with love
Wings of undeniable strength
that came to support
~me~
You revealed the inside
The raw and unnamed
You opened your heart, sweet sister
And spread .....Your angel wings.
6-13/14-07
Laura Horner
for Kerry Lynne (I love you, sis)
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Your Angel Wings
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deadheadpoet
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Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:00:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You with your beautiful heart
With your beautiful soul
Opened up and revealed
things which lay hidden within
Things which tarnish ones' path
~~Those who judge
simply have not lived~~
Brave is what you are
You waited with baited breath
You watched to see
"How will she go
about this process?"
You saw me falter
Like a silkened vapor
you flew in
and caught me on
your angel wings
Oh my sweet sister
miles separate us
but the vibes of Earth do connect
and I feel you beating
Wings golden
Wings tarnished
Wings torn and mended with love
Wings of undeniable strength
that came to support
~me~
You revealed the inside
The raw and unnamed
You opened your heart, sweet sister
And spread .....Your angel wings.
6-13/14-07
Laura Horner
for Kerry Lynne (I love you, sis)
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:22:20 AM AEST
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With a tear of joy in my eye...
a fresh pack in my bowl
& a heart full of all the good stuff it was made for...
I thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
Gosh, I'm havin' a hard time articulating what,
I want to say, 'cause my soul is so wrapped up in feeling this.
I am w/o words for this incredible gift you've created w/ your own...for me...
WOW, WOW, WOW!!!I'm just sooo frickin' honored !!!
I'm filled w/ the warmth of what it is to be human
& I just don't know how to say that any better right now...
I LOVE YOU, LADY LAURA.
~KerryLynne
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:36:08 AM AEST
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Very powerful proclamation about an outstanding poet! Quite a exquisite weave of well chosen words. I love the style and the flow. Thank you for sharing Laura. As always a fine job of poetry.
SPLENDID!
SCM |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:41:21 AM AEST
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this is beautiful sis for yet another beautiful woman.
Michelle |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 09:47:56 AM AEST
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I'm with Michelle on this .. a beautiful write from one wonderful
woman to another wonderful woman.
laura, you are truly an angel. You go through the most heart
wrenching times and still never take those who love and
support you for granted. I bow to you, my sweet friend.
This was so captivating and strong. I say again ... You,
dear poet, are an angel. One of the highest.
Lovely sentiments and oh! so lovely tribute.
~MG
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by CuriousitysCat on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 02:27:33 PM AEST
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you definately managed to capture the motherly moon aspect of my mum here. also this write nicely portrays my mum's selflessness and rare but appreciated reckless abandon with her inner self. whoa...
;]
~jlC |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 02:27:48 PM AEST
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beautiful i am with michelle and breezy on this.
hugs |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 02:55:50 PM AEST
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A lovely and much deserving tribute to a person truly worthy of it indeed my sister laura . . .
((((peace 2u always))))
Ben |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by Spike on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 05:58:47 PM AEST
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L, A very moving personal tribute to your sibling, with all those lovely hidden meanings but with enough connection with the reader to resonate through and through.
So glad to know people have this bond. It gives me hope.
Spike |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 02:41:59 AM AEST
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Beautiful tribute to your sister, She must be so happy to have a sister with such a loving heart, I wish I had that bond with my sisters .
xxxxx |
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Re: Your Angel Wings
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by needledancing on
Friday, 22nd June 2007 @ 10:33:49 PM AEST
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| I am in total agreement with all these comments Laura. An angels words if every I have seen them. Truly a splendid and masterful write. |
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