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Array ( [sid] => 135231 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Want To Let You Go [time] => 2007-06-14 11:54:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm sitting on my couch just watching some TV, thinking about how I want to let you go.
I hear a knock on the door and my heart soars, thinking that you have come back.
I go to the door to see what it is and I realize that its just the wind.
I no longer can take this feeling.
I don't want to be a prisoner anymore.
I'm done hurting.
I'm done crying.
Your not my life anymore, and you never were.
They say if you love someone let them go.
So I guess it's clear you were never mine to begin wtih.
Sure I miss you, and if I could go back I would.
But I can't so I must deal with this hand I have been dealt.
Right now I'm in the dark, with a blanket for the cold.
The sun will come soon and I will smile again.
And only then will you understand how much you have truely lost. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 22 [informant] => dreamer89 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Want To Let You Go

Contributed by dreamer89 on Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 11:54:01 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I'm sitting on my couch just watching some TV, thinking about how I want to let you go.
I hear a knock on the door and my heart soars, thinking that you have come back.
I go to the door to see what it is and I realize that its just the wind.
I no longer can take this feeling.
I don't want to be a prisoner anymore.
I'm done hurting.
I'm done crying.
Your not my life anymore, and you never were.
They say if you love someone let them go.
So I guess it's clear you were never mine to begin wtih.
Sure I miss you, and if I could go back I would.
But I can't so I must deal with this hand I have been dealt.
Right now I'm in the dark, with a blanket for the cold.
The sun will come soon and I will smile again.
And only then will you understand how much you have truely lost.

Copyright © dreamer89 ... [ 2007-06-14 11:54:01]
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Re: I Want To Let You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 12:29:45 AM AEST
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Hi, I would have probably written this in a months time myself...im not done cryin as yet...but this has been a very touchin poem...very well written...i guess thats how it will remain...they will never understand what they are missin out on...maybe not now...one day they will....

Re: I Want To Let You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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touching write......the part about the knock on the door only to find it was the wind God that is powerful the excitement then the let down.

In the dark with a blanket for the cold....

so many words to play the heart song within this write.

Nicely done
Michelle

Re: I Want To Let You Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Anu on Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:28:52 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written.....really felt like appreciating ur poem n ur thoughts...!!

Beautifully penned down..!!

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