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‘Cause I’m much too used to hanging on to the past
I wish you’d stay with me a while longer
‘Cause I don’t know how much longer I’ll last
Can you see the path ahead of me?
It’s much too blurry to see
I don’t know if I can make it on my own
Will you go with me?
You see…
I need some help hanging on to my future
‘Cause I’m much too used to hanging on to my past
I wish you’d stay with me forever
I know with you I will last
I now see the path ahead of me
And it leads straight to you
You went with me
And you saw my future was you
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Much Too Used

Contributed by chrono110 on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:46:07 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I need some help hanging onto the future
‘Cause I’m much too used to hanging on to the past
I wish you’d stay with me a while longer
‘Cause I don’t know how much longer I’ll last
Can you see the path ahead of me?
It’s much too blurry to see
I don’t know if I can make it on my own
Will you go with me?
You see…
I need some help hanging on to my future
‘Cause I’m much too used to hanging on to my past
I wish you’d stay with me forever
I know with you I will last
I now see the path ahead of me
And it leads straight to you
You went with me
And you saw my future was you

Copyright © chrono110 ... [ 2007-06-13 13:46:07]
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Re: Much Too Used (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 02:26:00 PM AEST
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aw, its a cute poem and the rhyming flows along with nicely, good job

Re: Much Too Used (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 04:55:53 PM AEST
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you did a good job on this write.
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