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[aid] => mick
[title] => Unrecognizable
[time] => 2007-06-13 05:53:00
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Feeling so lonely
so abandoned
so betrayed
feeling like I can't
bear to see another
day
Wounds get so deep
so damaged
so irreparable
feeling like I can't speak
my voice silenced and...
Unrecognizable
5-07
Laura Horner
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[ratings] => 6
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Unrecognizable
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 05:53:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Feeling so lonely
so abandoned
so betrayed
feeling like I can't
bear to see another
day
Wounds get so deep
so damaged
so irreparable
feeling like I can't speak
my voice silenced and...
Unrecognizable
5-07
Laura Horner
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2007-06-13 05:53:00]
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 06:40:56 AM AEST
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I take it sis today is another one of those bad days?? What can I do? This is so sad it brought a couple tears to my eyes, one about ready to trickle down the cheek....
I so wish we were closer so I could sit and hug you.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:15:30 AM AEST
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Oh the anquish. This is so quick and packs such a blow of emotion. I am so sorry that you are going through these emotions. It is a tragedy that any of us feel unrecognizable especially to ourselves. Though unfortunately I feel we all go through it. I think you have done a great job in capturing such a moment to fear. As always you never cease to impress. I certainly wish you better days.
BRAVO
SCM |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:27:22 AM AEST
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Dear Laura, you have captured that moment of hopelessness
so utterly well here. Maybe too well, dear friend, as my heart
cries for tears that I know your soul sheds.
I feel ya here ... so hard to hold on sometimes, but you
are an amazing woman, sis. I hope for your release of this
anguish soon, hun. *hugs you tight*
~MG |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 09:12:57 AM AEST
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So sad a write brought back memories when I have hit lows....
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:37:17 AM AEST
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wow laurabean!! this is so sad and so moving.. very beautiful write.. but oh so sad..
Huggles hope you feel better soon
Jennittude |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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Emotionally tortured flow
excellent |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 01:18:18 PM AEST
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((((((((((((((peace 2u Laura))))))))))))))))
I feel for you my sister and the hoplessnes of it all but don't give up ok? we are all connected in some strange way and that means capable of an occational disconnection . . .
Ben |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by InfinitePoet on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:07:08 PM AEST
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BRAVO!!! I can understand and relate completely,at times I can look in the mirror and be unrecognizable even to myself....All i see there is the pain and sorow etc! You put your real honest feelings into your work and it shows those are the only things that make a poem a real poem and a poet a real poet in my eyes!keep writing and keep sharing! TTFN!
Peppermint Ki$$e$ |
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Re: Unrecognizable
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by Thespia on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:52:10 PM AEST
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| wow, so simple yet so powerfull. Lovely poem. |
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