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Array ( [sid] => 135172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is it to late? [time] => 2007-06-12 15:38:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sacrificed it all but still your dissapointed,
I worry that it's never gonna change,
What do I have to do
To prove that im good enough for you?
Maybe it's to late to try,
Is it still to late to die,

I've tried a million times to make it up to you,
I worry that it's to late to try,
Please tell me what to do,
To prove that I am good enough for you,
Just for once I'd like a little encouragement,
Just to tell me that it's not over,

I tried and tried to be the person that you said I should be,
But all it's done has bring me misery,
My broken heart need time to mend,
Im not strong enough to break the rain,
I no it's to late to cry,
but is it to late to die?

What would you have me do?
To prove my love for you,
Please say something just to let me know,
Just to let me know to let go so I can survive,
All these year of holding it all in,
I think that it's to late to try,

It's so hard for me to show you how much I care,
You don't even want to hear it,
Please just say something,
Anything before I die,
Just to let me know,
That I'll be fine,

I know now what this is,
It's that gaping hole where the heart should be,
To many years of filling in,
Now all that's left is sin,
I realize now this pain was love,
And it flew away just like a dove,


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Is it to late?

Contributed by fadingaway on Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 03:38:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sacrificed it all but still your dissapointed,
I worry that it's never gonna change,
What do I have to do
To prove that im good enough for you?
Maybe it's to late to try,
Is it still to late to die,

I've tried a million times to make it up to you,
I worry that it's to late to try,
Please tell me what to do,
To prove that I am good enough for you,
Just for once I'd like a little encouragement,
Just to tell me that it's not over,

I tried and tried to be the person that you said I should be,
But all it's done has bring me misery,
My broken heart need time to mend,
Im not strong enough to break the rain,
I no it's to late to cry,
but is it to late to die?

What would you have me do?
To prove my love for you,
Please say something just to let me know,
Just to let me know to let go so I can survive,
All these year of holding it all in,
I think that it's to late to try,

It's so hard for me to show you how much I care,
You don't even want to hear it,
Please just say something,
Anything before I die,
Just to let me know,
That I'll be fine,

I know now what this is,
It's that gaping hole where the heart should be,
To many years of filling in,
Now all that's left is sin,
I realize now this pain was love,
And it flew away just like a dove,






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Re: Is it to late? (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 12:42:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful...I actually felt sad readin this...im goin through the exact same thing...and i can feel me askin her the very same thing...i'd love to read more of your poems...very moving and i sometimes wish they can understand what they are missing by not bein with us...
but let the candle burn...keep the hope...


Re: Is it to late? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:37:34 AM AEST
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Wow you have talent. The two works (now) that I have read of yours are stellar and nothing less in any way. Your words and your sentiments scream to the poets soul. This was beautiful and deeply full of emotion and there is a strength in the utter sadness of this work.

BRAVO

SCM


Re: Is it to late? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:42:33 AM AEST
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this is a very well written very sad yet powerful moving write.. great job

Vampyress Jenni




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