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Array ( [sid] => 13513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Ghost Boy [time] => 2003-02-28 11:00:00 [hometext] => Good thing I don't have telekinetic powers...this world would be in pieces right now! I want to destroy everything around me to express how bad my psyche is right now... [bodytext] => Why did I care enough?!
To write to him, to sms him when he's alone...
To make contact...?!?!
To let him know that I'm thinking about him.
Why?

I mean...everytime I do
I know he won't reply and still...
I hope that some strange miracle would happen.
That he'd find it in his heart to make me happy.
To just reply, to confirm
His existence.
To let me know he's alive.
But he never does this!!!

Sometimes its like I care deeply for...
A ghost...
He's passing through...there
Yet not really here.
Maybe he doesn't exist.
Not the goofy, sweet, kind-hearted person
I made him...in my head.
That i hoped he was.
Who knows...?
Maybe I made him up to hold onto my sanity.

I still wait, it's not such an effort to reply...is it?
I worry about you when you get quiet.
Do you enjoy ignoring me?!
Well, it's not funny.

I'd probably stop worrying if you replied. God dammit!!
Why the heck do I bother!?
If frustration be the food of life then I want no part of it.

I'm better off hungry. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 295 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Arwen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Ghost Boy

Contributed by Arwen on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Why did I care enough?!
To write to him, to sms him when he's alone...
To make contact...?!?!
To let him know that I'm thinking about him.
Why?

I mean...everytime I do
I know he won't reply and still...
I hope that some strange miracle would happen.
That he'd find it in his heart to make me happy.
To just reply, to confirm
His existence.
To let me know he's alive.
But he never does this!!!

Sometimes its like I care deeply for...
A ghost...
He's passing through...there
Yet not really here.
Maybe he doesn't exist.
Not the goofy, sweet, kind-hearted person
I made him...in my head.
That i hoped he was.
Who knows...?
Maybe I made him up to hold onto my sanity.

I still wait, it's not such an effort to reply...is it?
I worry about you when you get quiet.
Do you enjoy ignoring me?!
Well, it's not funny.

I'd probably stop worrying if you replied. God dammit!!
Why the heck do I bother!?
If frustration be the food of life then I want no part of it.

I'm better off hungry.

Copyright © Arwen ... [ 2003-02-28 11:00:00]
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Re: Ghost Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:24:35 AM AEST
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"If frustration be the food of life... I'm better off hungry" <-- great lines :)

This is a really good write...sounds as if he's not worth your worrying.... but then what do I know? I've been there and done that myself...:S :)

~Dani~

Re: Ghost Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Tahany on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 08:00:39 PM AEST
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hey, know this feeling, guys... gotta hate um some times... a guy that frustating though may not be worth the time of it... keep writing though

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