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soft thoughts were ours
talks of far-away places
if onlys" rise.

That minute We were swift and sure
a fire" made the desert look small
Heat shimmers rise
joining tinseled sounds
of leaves giving to wind.

I am yours completely
at this breath, and always
I have your word I will carry
through time.

Memory rides
a nameless wind
The desert takes nothing..
but what We leave behind..

Here We will lie"
secrets or claim
We were lost between dreams...
and the cooling...a breath..and a need... Vincent
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Cooling

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 07:46:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Remember a night
soft thoughts were ours
talks of far-away places
if onlys" rise.

That minute We were swift and sure
a fire" made the desert look small
Heat shimmers rise
joining tinseled sounds
of leaves giving to wind.

I am yours completely
at this breath, and always
I have your word I will carry
through time.

Memory rides
a nameless wind
The desert takes nothing..
but what We leave behind..

Here We will lie"
secrets or claim
We were lost between dreams...
and the cooling...a breath..and a need... Vincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-06-10 07:46:39]
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Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 07:52:02 AM AEST
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An excellent write..

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:11:12 AM AEST
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Great work vin.
I'm sure it's very much appreciated.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:27:49 PM AEST
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Wow, this left a bit of mystery and wonder to me when I read it. You two sound like you have a great bond of friendship. As always, I love the brevity of the words and the intenseness of what they say.
Beautiful.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by coolkid7098 on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:47:07 PM AEST
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very nicely writen

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
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very well written

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 08:02:22 PM AEST
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This poem is like a gentle night breeze, soft and calming but also exciting and mysterious. You have captured this all.
A lovely write from your heart,

Take care,
Dom

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:08:01 PM AEST
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Wow... a Masterpiece! Beautiful words and a depth that touches the heart. This poem came from the heart... ~~ Oceandreamer~~

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 04:29:03 AM AEST
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Oh my GOd!!!

I have this huge surge of excitement come through me...... You captured everything right here. I almost have tears....... Thanks for this

love you
huge hugs

~Michelle~

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 10:55:39 AM AEST
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Vincent, this was a very sweet, soft and beautiful caress ..
like a cool breeze on warm skin. I love the atmosphere you
created with your words and the gentle way they flow ....

Dreamy, airy and soooo completely rapturous.

Exceptional work, my friend. As lovely as the midnight sky,
adorned with the silver glow of stars ~

~Breezy

Re: Cooling (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 08:29:43 AM AEST
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ahh sweet

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