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[aid] => mick
[title] => 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
[time] => 2007-06-07 17:22:55
[hometext] => Spiritually talkin to my hippy that passed away
[bodytext] => Code: 
He was an archeologist among other things
Our memor'ys lighting mind.
Rare jewels one of a kind.
Our time together lives on.
My heart feels your song.
Another one 4 my hippy
You always hold me
Over filling empty cup.
Another one 4 my hippy
Oh guardian angle divine.
Feel your smile lighting mine.
Another one for my hippy.
A week before you passed on
Called you up on the phone.
Just had you on my mind
Heard your voice, last time.
You thanked me for the call
Didn't know was end of it all.
Our souls touch all time.
Our moments, yours, mine.
Luv lights can be found
Jim's spirit's always round.
Two souls touch thru time
A long ago luv, ours so fine.
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[counter] => 407
[topic] => 55
[informant] => emystar
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[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
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4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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emystar
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Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 05:22:55 PM in AEST
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He was an archeologist among other things
Our memor'ys lighting mind.
Rare jewels one of a kind.
Our time together lives on.
My heart feels your song.
Another one 4 my hippy
You always hold me
Over filling empty cup.
Another one 4 my hippy
Oh guardian angle divine.
Feel your smile lighting mine.
Another one for my hippy.
A week before you passed on
Called you up on the phone.
Just had you on my mind
Heard your voice, last time.
You thanked me for the call
Didn't know was end of it all.
Our souls touch all time.
Our moments, yours, mine.
Luv lights can be found
Jim's spirit's always round.
Two souls touch thru time
A long ago luv, ours so fine.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2007-06-07 17:22:55]
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 10:23:20 PM AEST
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This is the most wonderful tribute to a good friend that any one would think off.... beautifully written.
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 01:49:58 AM AEST
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Emy,
Your heart is so big, my sister. I loved reading this. Jim sounds like a wonderful hippie friend to have. (gotta love the hippies) *smile and wink*
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Dom on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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A lovely testament to him from your kind heart.
Take care,
Dom |
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:26:25 AM AEST
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Beautifully put........a fitting tribute
May he always stay a crystal clear memory in your mind
Steve |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Bruce on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 06:06:35 PM AEST
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| A great heart warming, tribute to your friend. beautifully written. |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 12:24:07 AM AEST
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oh emy girl! this is so beautifully written, its light hearted way shows through all the love you have for him, that serious side, what the two of you shared, such a lovely tribute, blessings,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 05:15:34 AM AEST
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Very Nice
Whisper
Peace |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Crow on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 07:01:59 AM AEST
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| to be remembered and loved Emy is the greatest any could ask for. in the end all we are is our story" great tribute, and love in this..Vincent |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:27:40 PM AEST
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Great write! A poem in memory of a person who has touched your life in a special way... "Our time together lives on.
My heart feels your song." ...beautiful words. Thanks for sharing... ~~Oceandreamer~~
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 12:55:56 AM AEST
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Very preacious a memory this is and beautiful dedication.May you live all the beauty that is forever yours through these
poetic memories . . . Very lovely emy.
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 02:20:28 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, how beautiful. Filled with a passion that is
impossible to resist, my dear friend! I am certain
he would be so very happy and proud that you
remembered him in this tribute. His must have
been a very touching soul, for you to remember
him with so much love and happiness.
Wonderful write. Very moving ~
~Breezy |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:25:27 AM AEST
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such a beautiful dedication write you have penned out.. such devotion to a dear friend.. well done my friend
jenni
Ps. I can't get on my pms or in the forums so i figured i would have to write to someone who was a mod or could help me. Please fix my pm thing. ican't check them or get into the forums at all . it comes up done when i click on either.. I will appreciate any help.. thank you so much
jenni |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by StephaniePaige on
Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 02:02:32 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful, anyone would be honored to have something like this written in their memory. |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 10:55:00 PM AEST
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| Oh thats beautiful emmy. so sorry, to lose such a lovely friend is so painful, sounds like you have beautiful memories of him though and this is a wonderful tribute to him. xxxxxx |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 10:36:33 AM AEST
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What a splendid write for a dear friend.
You did a magnificent job here. It reminds me to let my friends know more often how much I value them. Thank you so much. |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 02:34:39 PM AEST
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| This is a really sweet and beautiful poem. I am sure you have a whole treasure trove of good memories! |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 03:11:50 PM AEST
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such a beautiful write Em and I am so sorry for your loss
Michelle |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by blueeyedangel74 on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 04:33:09 PM AEST
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Mom,
This is awesome, I miss him so much, he was my God father, but now he is my guardian angel. We love and miss you Jimmy! I am so honored he is watching over us.
We love you!
Dee |
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 09:51:59 AM AEST
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beautiful sadness Emy.. very touching-
..much love and strength to you my friend~
As always..
B |
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Re: 4 MY HIPPY THAT PASSED ON
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by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 04:15:19 PM AEST
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| *sniff* This is a gem. Beautiful and eloquent. I enjoyed this immensely. |
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