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Array ( [sid] => 135005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Thoughts [time] => 2007-06-07 08:22:50 [hometext] => i broke up with my girlfriend and just tried to write what i felt [bodytext] => I do care about you, I really do
Sitting here thinking non stop of you
Are you alright? Are you ok?
I miss the little cuddles I got from you each day
All the little things that have gone away
Those eyes, your eyes they made me melt
Your smile, your smell ill never forget
Your skin so soft to touch
Your lips so sweet to kiss
Even though I say these things
It’s because of me your gone
So why do I write this? I do not know
I just long for your love which you so freely gave
Even though I ended it I still care about you
If only you knew these things in my head
But better you don’t i'll just lay them to bed
You’ll never know my thoughts
You’ll never see this poem
You’ll never know I still care about you
Although it’s hard for me it’s much harder for you
I just hope you can forgive all that I do [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jujus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My Thoughts

Contributed by jujus on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 08:22:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I do care about you, I really do
Sitting here thinking non stop of you
Are you alright? Are you ok?
I miss the little cuddles I got from you each day
All the little things that have gone away
Those eyes, your eyes they made me melt
Your smile, your smell ill never forget
Your skin so soft to touch
Your lips so sweet to kiss
Even though I say these things
It’s because of me your gone
So why do I write this? I do not know
I just long for your love which you so freely gave
Even though I ended it I still care about you
If only you knew these things in my head
But better you don’t i'll just lay them to bed
You’ll never know my thoughts
You’ll never see this poem
You’ll never know I still care about you
Although it’s hard for me it’s much harder for you
I just hope you can forgive all that I do

Copyright Â© jujus ... [ 2007-06-07 08:22:50]
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Re: My Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 09:59:57 AM AEST
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Sometimes the best poems come from a place where we hurt the most. As I read yours, I could feel what it is that you must feel now and I felt a sorrow. This was for what is worth and excellent poem~Tot

Re: My Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 08:37:44 PM AEST
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Its sad that your hurting too, hope everything works out for you

Re: My Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by pooper on Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 07:47:54 AM AEST
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Beautifully sad

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