Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 12:52:35 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 135000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => granddad [time] => 2007-06-07 04:39:04 [hometext] => This is my first poem so any suggestion are appriciated [bodytext] => Granddad

I can remember that i felt no pain,
Your eyes starred at me
still happy and content.

This cruel disease had come to haunt you nights again,
I found myself sleepless.
Gazing outside for hours on end.

As you laid in that hospital bed
you held my hand, and i held yours to
it broke my heart even just to see you.

And now your recovering
i hold your hand with a smile on my face
knowing my granddad fought it again.

You make me want to work harder.
You make me want to run faster.
You make me. Me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lozwozere91 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

granddad

Contributed by lozwozere91 on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 04:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Granddad

I can remember that i felt no pain,
Your eyes starred at me
still happy and content.

This cruel disease had come to haunt you nights again,
I found myself sleepless.
Gazing outside for hours on end.

As you laid in that hospital bed
you held my hand, and i held yours to
it broke my heart even just to see you.

And now your recovering
i hold your hand with a smile on my face
knowing my granddad fought it again.

You make me want to work harder.
You make me want to run faster.
You make me. Me.

Copyright © lozwozere91 ... [ 2007-06-07 04:39:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: granddad (User Rating: 1 )
by katy on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:06:28 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I have to say that was very well wrote, im not an expert but you have put a lot of heart and effort into so your poem was very good. Keep up the good work.

Re: granddad (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 05:44:21 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Nice work, pure and heartfelt...........nobody can ask for more.
Took me back to memories of my own grandfather who is no longer with us.

Steve

Re: granddad (User Rating: 1 )
by lozwozere91 on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 03:40:08 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

thankyou very much for all your comments xx

Re: granddad (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 01:55:44 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Good heart wrenching poem Glad Granddad got better.bern

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com