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Array ( [sid] => 134973 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what is it you want? [time] => 2007-06-06 07:52:18 [hometext] => an idea i got about people with someone and if they really see who the person is inside [bodytext] => Is it me you really see?
or am I the soul you seek that will set you free
from all that used to be?

NO! NO! it isn't so!
You will take the knife and
stab with deception
turn your eyes to the wayward sky
ingoring my cries

outburst of flame
shall overtake
this heart that breaks!

As I die
with wounds in my eyes
that seep through the body
all that is left is the red blood
drawn from my veins

Vampyress Jenni [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Phantomvampyress [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

what is it you want?

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 07:52:18 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Is it me you really see?
or am I the soul you seek that will set you free
from all that used to be?

NO! NO! it isn't so!
You will take the knife and
stab with deception
turn your eyes to the wayward sky
ingoring my cries

outburst of flame
shall overtake
this heart that breaks!

As I die
with wounds in my eyes
that seep through the body
all that is left is the red blood
drawn from my veins

Vampyress Jenni

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2007-06-06 07:52:18]
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Re: what is it you want? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:00:00 AM AEST
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Aw ... good grief Jenni! Are you okay?

You have spoken a truth I wish we did not
have to suffer to know. And yet, if we did not
know it existed, how could we rectify it?

There is much to ponder within your words.
Much to take from and think about .. the next
time we find ourselves on either side of this
coin ...

well done!
~Breezy

Re: what is it you want? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:45:48 PM AEST
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Awesome Jenn, powerful u know i read the tittle and it rang with agitation then i read it and it has your old in your face expressivness. you never let the reader down your hard hitter. keep up the good work. aleays a joy to visit your page . . .

Ben

Re: what is it you want? (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 01:36:46 AM AEST
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This was deep, powerful and so full of truth that for some it might be hard to conceive.. This was written wonderfully. I do hope though that everything with you is doing okay.. This was wonderfully expressed. Well done.

Take care
Christina

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