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PUDDLES AND POOLS FILL MY EYES WITH TEARS AND DREAD

MY BLOOD GUSHES LIKE A POWERFULL RIVER ON A RAMPAGE FOR ALL THAT HAVE TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF HER CALMNESS

CANCER STRIKES ME ONCE AGAIN AS ALL LIFE SEEMED TO BE CLEAR , NOW SWEET THOUGHTS TURN TO VIOLENCE

WHY ME ,WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS

I HAVE MY WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF ME ,NOTHING I WANT TO MISS

HOW LONG DO I HAVE BEFORE I HAVE TO WALK THE DEVILS WALK , DANCING MERRILY TO THE SOUND OF MY OWN DEATH

I LAY IN MY DEATH BED JUST WAITTING ,WISHING ,HOPING THAT TODAY I WILL TAKE MY LAST BREATH

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last breath

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:42:15 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

THUNDER BOOMS AS THE LIGHTNING STRIKES DEEP WITHIN MY HEAD

PUDDLES AND POOLS FILL MY EYES WITH TEARS AND DREAD

MY BLOOD GUSHES LIKE A POWERFULL RIVER ON A RAMPAGE FOR ALL THAT HAVE TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF HER CALMNESS

CANCER STRIKES ME ONCE AGAIN AS ALL LIFE SEEMED TO BE CLEAR , NOW SWEET THOUGHTS TURN TO VIOLENCE

WHY ME ,WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS

I HAVE MY WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF ME ,NOTHING I WANT TO MISS

HOW LONG DO I HAVE BEFORE I HAVE TO WALK THE DEVILS WALK , DANCING MERRILY TO THE SOUND OF MY OWN DEATH

I LAY IN MY DEATH BED JUST WAITTING ,WISHING ,HOPING THAT TODAY I WILL TAKE MY LAST BREATH

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-06-06 04:42:15]
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Re: last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 05:17:02 AM AEST
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An awakening to our most dreaded fear. That one day it will be our bodies and souls leaving preparing for the flight that seems to harbour our greatest fear.The finishing.
If soul could just remember...it can not die. It lives forever and simply changes spaces.
There is always time to live the best life if you live it just for today.
A well written and well shared piece that brings all this rememberance to my mind. My thanks to you for this.

Re: last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Tot on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 08:31:33 AM AEST
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I definitely relate to this..I think we all fear death in some way or another and always tend to think that we have more time than we actually do. I think it was well thought and I like the way it was written.

Re: last breath (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:15:42 PM AEST
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It cant hurt, we all have to do.....but we can move on........we can enjoy.we can have life.......

always
brew~

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