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Array ( [sid] => 134917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2007-06-03 19:13:41 [hometext] => When a friend rips out your heart and soul, there's nothing left to do but write [bodytext] => Sick of feeling underappreciated,
I have severed all ties with you,
You never contributed to our friendship,
So I know it was the right thing to do.
I gave you everything I had to give,
And received nothing in returen,
So now it's time for you to feel my pain,
-To feel the sting of my inflicted burn.
You will be the one to feel the loss,
And the one who'll be broken hearted,
It sure as hell will not be me,
'Coz I have finished what you had started.
You had never fully grown up
From the fifteen year old you were before,
But I've moved on to bigger and better things,
-Of that you can be sure.
Never again will I be disappointed by you,
As you are no longer in my mind,
I hope you can move on with your life,
Just know - a better friend you will NEVER find. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Tamara [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Broken

Contributed by Tamara on Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 07:13:41 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Sick of feeling underappreciated,
I have severed all ties with you,
You never contributed to our friendship,
So I know it was the right thing to do.
I gave you everything I had to give,
And received nothing in returen,
So now it's time for you to feel my pain,
-To feel the sting of my inflicted burn.
You will be the one to feel the loss,
And the one who'll be broken hearted,
It sure as hell will not be me,
'Coz I have finished what you had started.
You had never fully grown up
From the fifteen year old you were before,
But I've moved on to bigger and better things,
-Of that you can be sure.
Never again will I be disappointed by you,
As you are no longer in my mind,
I hope you can move on with your life,
Just know - a better friend you will NEVER find.

Copyright Â© Tamara ... [ 2007-06-03 19:13:41]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 07:38:10 PM AEST
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Very good attitude and great writing.
Hang tuff as you seem to be very tuff.
huggs,
emy

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 10:25:52 PM AEST
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Sharing the pain with the person who caused it ,to ease the intensity of the pain that you are feeling…Emotional and well expressed .Great way of viewing the situation. Strong mind and well defined defenses. What a great write this is! ~~Oceandreamer~~

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 12:12:10 AM AEST
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Very nice write..

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