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Array ( [sid] => 13490 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => In the Rain and Crying [time] => 2003-02-28 02:40:00 [hometext] => This here is about an xboyfriend who was always seeking more, and who was never regretful,and never looked back and it killed to see him leave, and hurt even more to know he'd be alright. [bodytext] => all i wanted was a chance to hold on
but u fly so fast and its hard to tag along
and i tripped and fell on the trail of heartache that u left behind

its hurts, and its not fair
the sun is shining where you are
the raincloud overhead is a little more than i can bear
and you don't care.

i thought i could keep my head up and smile
but happiness is fake when your living in denial
if only i'd have known you were to up and go

sorrows boiling over the top
emotion is overflowing
i thought someday you would stop but
we said goodbye before ever knowing [comments] => 2 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Maybella [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

In the Rain and Crying

Contributed by Maybella on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

all i wanted was a chance to hold on
but u fly so fast and its hard to tag along
and i tripped and fell on the trail of heartache that u left behind

its hurts, and its not fair
the sun is shining where you are
the raincloud overhead is a little more than i can bear
and you don't care.

i thought i could keep my head up and smile
but happiness is fake when your living in denial
if only i'd have known you were to up and go

sorrows boiling over the top
emotion is overflowing
i thought someday you would stop but
we said goodbye before ever knowing

Copyright © Maybella ... [ 2003-02-28 02:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In the Rain and Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by blain on Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 04:01:08 AM AEST
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don't give him the satisfaction... keep your head up girl!!!! your ex is a dick, just like mine!! NEVER GIVE IN!!!!!!! u'll find someone else soon, someone who WILL care if ur sad.. remember, don't cry over someone who won't cry over you!!!!

Re: In the Rain and Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 04:41:48 PM AEST
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blain is right. you will be ok, too. hang in there. great lyrics by the way.

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