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Who filled up a book with all of his art
When the book was shunned away
He built a statue out of clay
When they smashed his statue to bits
The boy began to have some fits
When the doctors drugged him up
He was like a dog without a pup
When the dog began to whine
It was like a break in a line
When line began to fall
It was like a rolling ball
As the ball began to grow
It was like a mountain covered in snow
When the snow avalanched
It was like a snap in a branch
As the branch picked up speed
It was like an evil, little weed
As the weed began to spread
It was like a monster under their bed
When the monster began to roar
It was like a murderer at their door
When the door opened wide
It was like a bullet in their hide
As the people began to bleed
They all were dead. Dead indeed. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Dimes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

There Once was a Boy who thought he was Smart

Contributed by Dimes on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 09:37:47 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

There once was a boy who thought he was smart
Who filled up a book with all of his art
When the book was shunned away
He built a statue out of clay
When they smashed his statue to bits
The boy began to have some fits
When the doctors drugged him up
He was like a dog without a pup
When the dog began to whine
It was like a break in a line
When line began to fall
It was like a rolling ball
As the ball began to grow
It was like a mountain covered in snow
When the snow avalanched
It was like a snap in a branch
As the branch picked up speed
It was like an evil, little weed
As the weed began to spread
It was like a monster under their bed
When the monster began to roar
It was like a murderer at their door
When the door opened wide
It was like a bullet in their hide
As the people began to bleed
They all were dead. Dead indeed.

Copyright © Dimes ... [ 2007-06-01 09:37:47]
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Re: There Once was a Boy who thought he was Smart (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 12:10:38 PM AEST
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Hm.....very interesting write.I could feel words, expressing differ feelings as well as thoughts, that have been running through ones' mind. Good post..but dark hmm, I dont know but hey I write with my inner heart......LOL

Brew~

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