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How long have you been lying?
How long have you lost the truth?
Don't you know that I feel
Your behavior so unkind and uncouth

The eyes that say I love you
Are the same that did betray
Maybe you should save your sentiments
For me some other sunless day

Bi Polar baby
Changing moods hour to hour
Feeling hate and anger then...
Suddenly that longing desire

One day curled in a ball
Nursing my now branded soul
Tomorrow comes..sun comes up
Reflective lights of gold

Crazy to live this way
Feelings twisting constantly about
I'm forever being carried
on a raging river of doubt

5-26-07
Laura Horner
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River of Doubt

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How long have you been lying?
How long have you lost the truth?
Don't you know that I feel
Your behavior so unkind and uncouth

The eyes that say I love you
Are the same that did betray
Maybe you should save your sentiments
For me some other sunless day

Bi Polar baby
Changing moods hour to hour
Feeling hate and anger then...
Suddenly that longing desire

One day curled in a ball
Nursing my now branded soul
Tomorrow comes..sun comes up
Reflective lights of gold

Crazy to live this way
Feelings twisting constantly about
I'm forever being carried
on a raging river of doubt

5-26-07
Laura Horner

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Re: River of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:25:58 PM AEST
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Oh I feel this one sis....... yes those rivers of tears and rivers of doubts like salt in a wound that doesn't seem to heal, I know!!
Your writing is out of this world and is a good release for you sis.......

long big huggers

~Michelle~

Re: River of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 04:30:54 PM AEST
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this is a hard time for you right now, brighter days will come my friend, keep writing. Vincent

Re: River of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by eckenrode on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 06:08:18 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem it reads great, sounds great, and is just all around great ..... good work

Re: River of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 07:07:11 AM AEST
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Emotional , deep ,mysterious ,catchy , imaginative and beautiful words.This poem has it all. Awesome! Keep writing. ~~ Oceandreamer~~

Re: River of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 01:32:15 AM AEST
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Deep.. This was very well expressed and wrote out. You can feel your emotions just pour from the page. Very powerful and raw with honesty. Well done.

Take care
*hugs*
Christina

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