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Array ( [sid] => 134836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => vile tongue [time] => 2007-05-31 11:48:48 [hometext] => One shot poetry about the UK govenrment, Feed back welcomed [bodytext] => Vile are the lies,
From government lips,
Their evil quotes
And sadistic quips,
Vile is the state,
You've left me in,
Unable to afford
The innocent sin,
Vile is the ruin,
This one great land,
Driving stout patriots
To new shores and sand,
Vile is the control,
In which we're locked,
Disallowed freedom
When your gun is cocked,
Vile is the time,
Mine you take,
Your greed consumes
Your lust to slake,
Vile is the point,
That became unclear,
When laid dying
Why can't i hear,
Vile is the dignity,
I was deprived,
Naught for money
I had survived,
Vile is my poverty,
A gift of your's,
Cast down cunfused
These weary laws,
Vile is the legacy,
Forged by force,
At my expense
But of course,
Vile is your contempt,
As loyal subject,
My life decaying
From your neglect,
Vile are your rules,
Never twice the same,
Explained to foreigners
Behind my shame,
Vile is your crime,
With tax i fund,
Yet i commit naught
And still i'm shunned,
Vile all you are,
One and last,
These new mistakes
Once were past
Vile is the sight,
when the old die young,
For young know fear
Of your vile tongue [comments] => 1 [counter] => 296 [topic] => 13 [informant] => 5MinutePoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

vile tongue

Contributed by 5MinutePoet on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 11:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Vile are the lies,
From government lips,
Their evil quotes
And sadistic quips,
Vile is the state,
You've left me in,
Unable to afford
The innocent sin,
Vile is the ruin,
This one great land,
Driving stout patriots
To new shores and sand,
Vile is the control,
In which we're locked,
Disallowed freedom
When your gun is cocked,
Vile is the time,
Mine you take,
Your greed consumes
Your lust to slake,
Vile is the point,
That became unclear,
When laid dying
Why can't i hear,
Vile is the dignity,
I was deprived,
Naught for money
I had survived,
Vile is my poverty,
A gift of your's,
Cast down cunfused
These weary laws,
Vile is the legacy,
Forged by force,
At my expense
But of course,
Vile is your contempt,
As loyal subject,
My life decaying
From your neglect,
Vile are your rules,
Never twice the same,
Explained to foreigners
Behind my shame,
Vile is your crime,
With tax i fund,
Yet i commit naught
And still i'm shunned,
Vile all you are,
One and last,
These new mistakes
Once were past
Vile is the sight,
when the old die young,
For young know fear
Of your vile tongue

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Re: vile tongue (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:00:53 PM AEST
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Not sure if it was short.But hey its ALL goverments...Im american and OURS sucks....We cant control them: for not enough ppl would vote to end what is wrong. Liked it tho...full of power and belief...Keep fighting, maybe one day you will prevail.

Brew~

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