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Keep thinking about you
and that sweet young smile
Eyes looking into mine
man, it's been awhile
~~*wow, are you flirting?*

I've always been satisfied
with the one I've got
Lately his doings
put me sort of on the spot
~~*how could he do me this way?"

Now my mind is thinking
and wondering what to do
Never thought about another
then in walks you
~~*grins deviously*

Flirtatious look
you know you can't deny
Couldn't wait to hold one another
~~*can you squeeze me any tighter?*
as we said good-bye?

5-26-07
Filled with slight sarcasm, humor and a little wonder.....*laughs*
Laura Horner [comments] => 6 [counter] => 328 [topic] => 56 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

As We Say Good-Bye

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 09:24:41 AM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Keep thinking about you
and that sweet young smile
Eyes looking into mine
man, it's been awhile
~~*wow, are you flirting?*

I've always been satisfied
with the one I've got
Lately his doings
put me sort of on the spot
~~*how could he do me this way?"

Now my mind is thinking
and wondering what to do
Never thought about another
then in walks you
~~*grins deviously*

Flirtatious look
you know you can't deny
Couldn't wait to hold one another
~~*can you squeeze me any tighter?*
as we said good-bye?

5-26-07
Filled with slight sarcasm, humor and a little wonder.....*laughs*
Laura Horner

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Re: As We Say Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 11:58:42 AM AEST
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wow a very creative write you have penned out.. well done

Vampyress JENNI

Re: As We Say Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:03:38 PM AEST
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Vivid images are put for this.I could see where you walk in and see another with them....You not saying a word, but if looks could Kill,they did,,,and thats the best part of it.You leave with smile upon face.....Great piece....I would have done the same.....LOL

Brew~

Re: As We Say Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:44:35 PM AEST
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well written.... I liked the intensity in it.
FRANCO.

Re: As We Say Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:44:42 PM AEST
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good to see you laughing again my sister hope all is well as can be expected nicely done as always . . .

Peace 2u my Sister Laura

Ben

Re: As We Say Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:58:14 PM AEST
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mmmmmm I likes this maybe still got a little on your mind ey??

Good write
Michelle

Re: As We Say Good-Bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:06:55 PM AEST
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Very creative sister
and oh so refreshing to read.
great job

hugs

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