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What I've been dying to know
The reasons for hurting
and raping my soul

Stress got the best
Made him think strange things
Needed time without us
For his own soul to sing

Chose the wrong path
Oh yes he did stray
Thought it would be fun
To go out and play

He left the heart that loved him
And paid for one that did not
Kiss and tell me good-bye
You left my self to rot

You needed something different
A change in the scenery
You pleasured yourself
totally disregarding me

I'm left here with the knowledge
That I wasn't so important
Your love was not as strong as mine
In fact I find it mordant

5-27-07
Laura Horner

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Mordant

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 05:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He reveals it all to me
What I've been dying to know
The reasons for hurting
and raping my soul

Stress got the best
Made him think strange things
Needed time without us
For his own soul to sing

Chose the wrong path
Oh yes he did stray
Thought it would be fun
To go out and play

He left the heart that loved him
And paid for one that did not
Kiss and tell me good-bye
You left my self to rot

You needed something different
A change in the scenery
You pleasured yourself
totally disregarding me

I'm left here with the knowledge
That I wasn't so important
Your love was not as strong as mine
In fact I find it mordant

5-27-07
Laura Horner

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Re: Mordant (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 06:40:32 AM AEST
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wow laurabean this is a true emotionally penned out powerful write here.. its very heartfelt. it flows so eloquently too. beautiful write

Jennittude

Re: Mordant (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 06:42:11 AM AEST
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Damn this hit me right in the heart sis,
A well written poem though the pain involved I feel so sorry for.

Michelle

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