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Array ( [sid] => 134809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving [time] => 2007-05-30 16:54:11 [hometext] => This, like some of my others, is a poem about death. My way of handling loss is writing. [bodytext] => I was away
And you had to go.

When I came back
I had no idea
That we'd missed each other...

Just by a week.

"There comes a time,"
They told me once,
"When it's time to go."

And I was alone.

I lived and grieved. Alone.

While I wandered,
I stopped at a place to rest.

Before I left, I saw a note
Written on the wall just outside

That said,
"The last half of a journey is leaving."

Then I knew
You had always been ready. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 406 [topic] => 13 [informant] => TheSpiritx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving

Contributed by TheSpiritx on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 04:54:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I was away
And you had to go.

When I came back
I had no idea
That we'd missed each other...

Just by a week.

"There comes a time,"
They told me once,
"When it's time to go."

And I was alone.

I lived and grieved. Alone.

While I wandered,
I stopped at a place to rest.

Before I left, I saw a note
Written on the wall just outside

That said,
"The last half of a journey is leaving."

Then I knew
You had always been ready.

Copyright © TheSpiritx ... [ 2007-05-30 16:54:11]
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Re: The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:00:07 AM AEST
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I really liked this, its simple and to the point.
The title really drew me in, it is a lovely line.

Dom

Re: The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:11:40 PM AEST
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Losing is hard.but we know deep down we must all go to another place when its time.why? I dont know.......that will be answered one day. I know I lost my mom 3 yrs ago..at young age, and i hated it....but i have lost now all granparents and mom in the past 4 yrs.......But i have to know they are better off. Just member the wonderful thoughts when your sad, it helps. Again , Im sorry!

Brew~

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