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WHY DID YOU DIE

ONLY TO LEAVE ME WITH THESE TEARS

YOU WERE TO BE MY LOVE MY BABY MY EVERYTHING

WAKE UP DON'T GO AWAY

PLEASE I WANT YOU TO STAY

BORN OUT OF WEDLOCK

YOU WERE TO BE

THE LIFE OUTSIDE OF ME

BUT YOU LEFT BEFORE I EVER KNEW

WHAT YOU EVER WANTED TO DO

NOW I WONDER WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN

YOU WERE TO BE MY FIRST BORN CHILD

I SIT HERE WISHING I WAS MAking YOU SMILE

I LOVE YOU DEAVON

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 39 [informant] => MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

DEAVON

Contributed by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 06:03:22 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

WHY DID YOU DIE

ONLY TO LEAVE ME WITH THESE TEARS

YOU WERE TO BE MY LOVE MY BABY MY EVERYTHING

WAKE UP DON'T GO AWAY

PLEASE I WANT YOU TO STAY

BORN OUT OF WEDLOCK

YOU WERE TO BE

THE LIFE OUTSIDE OF ME

BUT YOU LEFT BEFORE I EVER KNEW

WHAT YOU EVER WANTED TO DO

NOW I WONDER WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN

YOU WERE TO BE MY FIRST BORN CHILD

I SIT HERE WISHING I WAS MAking YOU SMILE

I LOVE YOU DEAVON

Copyright © MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE ... [ 2007-05-29 06:03:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: DEAVON (User Rating: 1 )
by lottalivin on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 06:34:35 AM AEST
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some of what you say is very cliche
but that is overpowered by the deep feeling you out into it
your meaning comes across very well

Re: DEAVON (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 08:14:42 AM AEST
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I am sorry this happened. This is a very heartfelt write. God Bless.

Re: DEAVON (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 09:09:47 AM AEST
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You never know why what is taken from one....It was given, but then gone. Sad , deep write, truly from the heart. ....But remember,...it was meant, and maybe one day you will see why. I really cant tell you anymore, than I already have.

HUGS

Brew~

Re: DEAVON (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 11:21:15 AM AEST
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Im so sorry for this loss, loss in general is hard but when it is a child there is no sense or reason to it, heartbreaking write. You dont have Deavon sadly in this life but you will have the sweet child with you in the next.

hugs
Michelle

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