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Array ( [sid] => 134768 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Knocking At My Door [time] => 2007-05-29 04:01:35 [hometext] => This is just fiction [bodytext] => Why did you come knocking at my
Door,

After the changes, you put me through

Did you think I would repeat the same
Mistakes I so blindly walked in once
Before

And just walk back through that same
Old door..

Why did you come knocking at my door?

Thinking I would rekindle the fire once
Burned,

But I can smile and tell you this much
The flames has flicker and flicker out

Your words are just like the air, I do not
Hear them anymore..

Nor do I care about your words they
Mean nothing at all to me

Congratulations, congratulations you
Gotten wish..

Now you come running back here to
Me..

After you seen things were not as you
Figure..

But now it is to late!

You made your bed so just lay in it
Now you see the grass is not always
Greener on the other side..

But I certainly salute you and gladly
Say fair well..

For life is on track now without you
Being an evil demon..
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 52 [informant] => honey56 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Knocking At My Door

Contributed by honey56 on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 04:01:35 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Why did you come knocking at my
Door,

After the changes, you put me through

Did you think I would repeat the same
Mistakes I so blindly walked in once
Before

And just walk back through that same
Old door..

Why did you come knocking at my door?

Thinking I would rekindle the fire once
Burned,

But I can smile and tell you this much
The flames has flicker and flicker out

Your words are just like the air, I do not
Hear them anymore..

Nor do I care about your words they
Mean nothing at all to me

Congratulations, congratulations you
Gotten wish..

Now you come running back here to
Me..

After you seen things were not as you
Figure..

But now it is to late!

You made your bed so just lay in it
Now you see the grass is not always
Greener on the other side..

But I certainly salute you and gladly
Say fair well..

For life is on track now without you
Being an evil demon..

Copyright © honey56 ... [ 2007-05-29 04:01:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Knocking At My Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 08:45:46 AM AEST
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Honey, for a fictional piece, this felt exceptionally real.
wonderful portrayal of a love that turned its back, only to realize
later what was missing .. .I only wish that we could all have the
strength you have exercised here, in being able to slam the
door shut; never turning back. Excellent write, my friend.

~Breezy

Re: Knocking At My Door (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 01:04:20 AM AEST
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A sad but what seems to be a quite liberating peice of writting. A carthasus of the heart and soul. And though it may be fiction it also is real in that this occurance is to often apart
of love in this day and age. lovely presentaion none the less.

Ben

Re: Knocking At My Door (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 07:00:29 AM AEST
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wow this is like a real story even though its fictional.. so powerful and full of emotion. great job

Vampyress Jenni

Re: Knocking At My Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:46:35 AM AEST
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good write, shows strength we don`t always have in the real" it is powerful and centered..Vincent

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