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Is how much I care about you

You make me smile when it rains
You try to heal all my pains

You try so hard, and I don't know why
I've already ran out of tears to cry

Nothing you could do would hurt me
Maybe you should just let me be

I would do anything for you
And I hope all your dreams come true

But I am going through depression
And when I'm with you, I let it out as agression

What I'm trying to say is this:
You deserve pure happiness

And since I can't give that you
I'm going to have to move on with my life...without you.

You are an amazing guy
And writing this makes me cry

But I am in so much pain
And my life is going down the drain

I am going through so much misery
And I dont want to drag you down with me

I may seem like this happy girl
But when I look in the mirror I wanna hurl

I can't stand the person looking back at me
And I dont want you to end up as miserable as me

And since I love you
I couldn't stand hurting you

This is my way of trying to prevent it
Oh yeah, and everything I just said, I meant it
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Without You

Contributed by Rigidy on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 01:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



The only thing in my life that is really true
Is how much I care about you

You make me smile when it rains
You try to heal all my pains

You try so hard, and I don't know why
I've already ran out of tears to cry

Nothing you could do would hurt me
Maybe you should just let me be

I would do anything for you
And I hope all your dreams come true

But I am going through depression
And when I'm with you, I let it out as agression

What I'm trying to say is this:
You deserve pure happiness

And since I can't give that you
I'm going to have to move on with my life...without you.

You are an amazing guy
And writing this makes me cry

But I am in so much pain
And my life is going down the drain

I am going through so much misery
And I dont want to drag you down with me

I may seem like this happy girl
But when I look in the mirror I wanna hurl

I can't stand the person looking back at me
And I dont want you to end up as miserable as me

And since I love you
I couldn't stand hurting you

This is my way of trying to prevent it
Oh yeah, and everything I just said, I meant it




Copyright © Rigidy ... [ 2007-05-26 13:42:40]
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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 04:30:52 PM AEST
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Excellent..absolutely touching...i dont know if what u wrote is whats goin on in ur life...but i do know im in the receivin end in somethin similar...and i know it hurts...it even hurt me reading this poem...but nonetheless its beautiful...check my poems...they are all in a similar vein...
take care and i hope everything ends well....


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 11:07:29 PM AEST
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A hearfelt write, good start, trailed off a bit tho, still, very good :-)


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Thespia on Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:43:22 AM AEST
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You express your emotions beautifully, I can really feel your pain, ive been through something similar in the past, I know how hard it is. I hope everything turns out ok for you. A lovely poem!




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