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Array ( [sid] => 134635 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Erosion [time] => 2007-05-23 16:01:52 [hometext] => Not only can soil and rock be displaced by eroding factors...so too can we, as humans. [bodytext] =>

A dozen
droplets of rain
fell delicately
elegantly
on the plain.

So many drops
fell there.
Washing small rocks
far away
from here.

Watch them fall
from the earth
that once held
them snuggly
comfortably
in their place...

before

the

erosion

came

and washed it
all away.

2/07
Laura Horner [comments] => 6 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 64 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Erosion

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:01:52 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

A dozen
droplets of rain
fell delicately
elegantly
on the plain.

So many drops
fell there.
Washing small rocks
far away
from here.

Watch them fall
from the earth
that once held
them snuggly
comfortably
in their place...

before

the

erosion

came

and washed it
all away.

2/07
Laura Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-05-23 16:01:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Erosion (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:06:54 PM AEST
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sis this is so powerful and true. the pic just added more to the already profound and reaching poem. this is good stuff.

luv u
hugsss
Michelle

Re: Erosion (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:37:06 AM AEST
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i feel like i just watched the rain, {i love rain}, a poem should carry one else where, if but for a moment, thanks, for today it is hot,

love n' hugs nessa

roses

Re: Erosion (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:19:01 AM AEST
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This my sister is a sharing of the inner knowlege and i can feel your teachings only to well. Your a message not only waiting to be read but acknowleged as well. Beautiful work my hippie friend . . .

(((((peace 2 u always my sister laura)))))

Ben

Re: Erosion (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:37:04 AM AEST
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so true and wise this is laurabean.. beautiful wording and such a great flow to this.. exquisite piece of poetry here.. great job

huggles,

Jennittude

Re: Erosion (User Rating: 1 )
by Neo-Theatre on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 11:54:56 AM AEST
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A wonderful metaphysical excercise.

Perfect length.

One seamless analogy delivered brilliantly.

Always in our thoughts,

TNT

Re: Erosion (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 03:35:18 AM AEST
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Powerful and brillant.. This poem was well expressed and worded.. another amazing poem by an amazing poet.. Well done..

Take care
Christina

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