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A Walk with the Devil
Contributed by
adreana
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:52:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I
was
out
scouting
some
peace
of...
mind
when the
Devil
crossed
my path
turned
to me
and...
said
"Follow
me
through
fire
and
ice
till
your
feet
can
walk...
no more"
So I
took
that
trip
and
lost
my
feet
to
curiosity
so
I am
now...
motionless.
Copyright ©
adreana
... [
2007-05-22 06:52:18] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: A Walk with the Devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterat_Zool on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:17:00 PM AEST (User
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A fun little social commentary poem. I like your form. It fits well here. Very nice, old friend. Welcome back to the site.
How's... where are you these days? Seattle? Texas? I lose track... What have been up to lately?
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Re: A Walk with the Devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:23:21 PM AEST (User
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Very nice poem..It made me smile..
Blessing |
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Re: A Walk with the Devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 12:03:27 AM AEST (User
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This was good.. I liked how you wrote it.. It was very creative.. Well done.
Take care
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Re: A Walk with the Devil
(User Rating: 1 ) by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 05:38:05 AM AEST (User
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I love these nagotiative poems with no less than the main man himself, quite a clever peice, not to mention very interesting along with entertaing to read. Nice work . . .
thank you also for your comment.
Ben |
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